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Ah yes, isekai into the creator's own game.The grammar and characters have been fleshed out nicely. Your sentence structures are for the most part great! The breaking of the 4th wall is a nice twist and its not abused too which is good. The only problem I have is the plot. What's Jason and Mo Zuo's end goals? This is his game so he knows everything about it, but what is his purpose? This could very well be explained later, but I just recommend making it clear near the beginning chapters!
Good story..........."..................................................................... Writing quality great stability of story good everything is good so far
Are there no chapters this week? will there be update of chapter next week??
How is everyone? Hope you are always in good condition.Add to reading list and don't forget to leave a rating if you like it. Love you, all.
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1 star for making the novel so disgusting.I don't like the fact the Mc will start liking the girl even though she did harmful things to him. Even if he did it first but that doesn't mean they should do it to him.
I'm giving myself 5 stars because everyone does it :PI'm not an expert on writing stories however I think I improve with every chapter I do.Not sure tho.
More of what made TAP awesome to read. New characters added and a new game. It's still early, only about 40 chapters in, but the MC and his friends are in the mid-levels and really affecting things on the newly opened Phoenix Server. Tal, Quinn, Anna, Leah, Mojo and the Songbirds are frequent visitors. Songbird Robin has a bigger role in this story then she did in the last.
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