Aon9114
I truly enjoy this novel to its fullest. The moment I started reading it I was hooked and couldn't stop reading it. This novel has made it to top of my l list favorite novels to read.
The story plot good. I always love this kind of plot, from a pic nobody no greatness . I love his ability to remember everything upon reading. ( I hope of that ability as well..heheh).
Reading this novel after the initial 80 chapters have given me nothing but boredom and disappointment. Every chapters feels like a filler. Battle description is so-so and it only happens every other tens of chapters. haa my expectations for a somewhat good start became failure.
The start has a unique uptake to the transmigration genre and this is kill the villain but reversed. Mc is merciless and I like how people actually have a brain and not just a one dimensional character.
....So what's with the cat?? Lol~~I think I might like this. Well it sounds interesting at least!
This reads like a mid-2010s **** cable tv show, and it's glorious.There's a certain feel in your story. Like your characters are really living their lives in the moment. It's a sense of wierd nostalgia that I cant put my finger on. It's good, is what I'm trying to say.Very wholesome. Keep on writing ?
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The writing quality is excellent, grammar is great, updates are rolling, and story development is awesome. The characters are cool but i'd like more description of what they look like and what their underlying motives are. The world-building is fantastic but I'd like more environmental description. This story hits just about every checkbox except I notice that the story is too often dialogue without anything else, so add that and this story will be elite.Feel free to look at my story "Avatar: Macai's Journey". Cheers
The setting reminds me of the legendary mechanic but with a fantasy theme added, similarly there are game elements along a promise of players coming in a year time. There are also elves royalties among other things, with the beginning being more of the mc building up his inherited village than solo play.
la historia es interesante pero no me terminan de agradar la conveniente suerte que tiene el personaje principal porque sin tener idea de las consecuencias de sus acciones terminan beneficiandole. Se vuelve mucho más fuerte casi sin quererlo y eso le quita el drama y la incertidumbre que necesita una buena historia. En mi opinión también le falta fuerza al antagonista, me gustaría mayor participación de los demonios o de una fuerza que rivalice con el protagonista. Como dije, parece que todo le sale bien a Leo.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Stupid system in cultivation with arrogant MC. These types of novels are literally EVERYWHERE. Can you please put these types of novels in trial reading so we can choose NOT to read these? THANK YOU!
