[door opens]
Rey turned to see Han and Chewee and after standing with the help of Finn, she went to them and hugged them too.
"Make yourself at home." Aaron signed, directing Jackson as he walked in.
May God bless you with complete and speedy recovery
"LIAR!"
was super strong invisible dragon was inbisible but he saw him and super strong
"hah~ fuck i almost died!!!"
Following the footsteps of most authors on Webnovel, I would set the first milestone in the Review section by giving myself 5 stars??This is my first creation as a amateur novelist. Hope you guys will support this novel all along the way ?Thank you?
It's updated till 9 chaps and so far so good, except some cringe lines along the way which makes you laugh ?? and the author needs to work for the grammar a little bit... overall, it's all good actually... I absolutely love it ? it's a fresh story and I hope the author doesn't drop this novel
I hope you don't write your though in the story.. there is creator Though in end of Chapter, so the reader didnt pay for something that not for story
I wish I could give the writing quality more than 5 stars. Stylistically it’s one of the best novels I have read on this platform. The form and structure is also well defined. The dialogue flows, and the world building doesn’t feel like exposition, which honestly makes it already the top 10% in the originals.The characters aren’t just some cutouts and have their own quirks and habits. The background is well established and makes sense based on their personalities. I also really like the Main leads sister.The only thing is that I feel the characters, especially the Mc, are a bit too normal. I like Characters that are more expressive. However this is just my personal opionon and won’t affect the review.The story development, albeit slow, is very steady and we can already expect a lot of future events due to to foreshadowing. The MC has a clear motivation, and it’s is explained why he acts the way he does.I’ve only read until Chapter 6 but I plan on going further. The novel is definitely one worth checking out. Since even for someone like me, who is not too don’t of Sci-if, it can be enjoyable.
Where is new chapter????????????????????????????????????????????I can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!