loving the story so far.
I hate Logan character
Must read this. ❤️
Looking forward to your next boo
Very interesting read. Worth it.
The book was good just wish the author transition between characters and timelines were better
Very captivating so far!!
An easy read. Intriguing turn of events so far.
This is an amazing book, can't wait to keep reading
Such an interesting read
Great story. You can feel all the emotions Leilani went through.
The narrative isn't necessarily bad, but the issue lies in its simplicity. The story feels like a basic civilization game, where the protagonist, upon arriving in the new world, instantly commands the creation of gunpowder weapons without delving into the sourcing of resources, finances, or the intricacies involved. The process of turning a musket from an idea into reality is glossed over, making it seem too easy.
The same applies to cannon production; it's a linear progression of "make gunpowder" -> "acquired", "make cannons" -> "acquired", and so on. There's no development of a realistic industrial infrastructure, no sense of time and effort required to achieve each milestone, no character skill-building, or consideration for financial planning.
In essence, I hesitate to classify this as a true kingdom-building novel and would rather describe it as a straightforward "acquire technology" simulation.