Looks, I will admit that this novel is entertaining and despite so many frustrating moments, I actually enjoy reading this. BUT!Here the but, is that this is novel is barely original. I just read this until 60 chapter, and maybe it will get better and more original. But damn man, at this point I can count two novel with the same plot and the same character in this novel. The first novel is Beautiful Top Star and the second is Top Management. I meant, I get it if it was only as inspiration, but all the chapters that I read so far mostly looks like cut, paste and edited. Tbh, if it was adaptation from only Beautiful Top Star I am probably okay reading this. But then came the plot that looks almost the same as Top Management and bruh this really starting to looks like plagiarism.Not only that but the grammar and typo also more abundant in here. But I don't mind it because I was just finishing reading some MTL novel and my mind still in mtl mode, so it was mostly okay
I've read up to chapter 354.Reading up to that point, I had barely any issues with the novel but as I continue reading did I realize the problems it has. 1. Unless a side character is a part of the current plot, they are hardly mentioned by name, leaving some with just a title as their name. Every Arc in this story appears to have a female protag that follows Noah(MC) on his journey within a particular arc. So far, Noah's had *** with two of them, which is fine but I doubt that'll be it. The female protags don't really do much after the arc they're introduced, reduced to backstage characters.2. Skills. So far in this novel, Noah either killed enemies of an (x)rank to get the equivalent skill book for that rank or combined compatible skills to give them (+)modifier, a halfway point to the next rank. Doing that again with another compatible skill with the modifier will rank it up the next rank. So, A > A+ > S.That's fine and good. I like it, but then another way got added and it got ignored. Using the island time distortion of 1:20(1 day in reality = 20 days in distortion), he could've leveled his Transcendent skills to Saint and then Saint to Void and Void to Soul Rank in only a few months where in reality only a few days pass. He doesn't though and instead spends weeks training in reality with the Celestial skills during sparring matches.In that time, he could've potentially reached Soul rank and above. Of course, the new method of getting stronger skills is strong but that shouldn't distract from what he had been doing previously.3. The MC and Skills. In the entirety of this novel, how many times do you think Noah(MC) has made something unique or created his own skill? Well, I'm sure you can infer by the way I'm talking that it isn't much.In fact, if I'm recalling correctly, he hasn't made a single unique skill or any skills at all! When Noah was sparring, his senior Sister and their master were amazed about how good he was at adapting to the new skills, even more so when he uses the skills in ways they never thought possible!Is this due to his talent? They think so, but it isn't. It's due to the new method of increasing the strength of skills and that's it. He literally doesn't have to put any thought into a skill and can just increase its strength on a whim. Honestly, that would be fine if it weren't for one key thing...He doesn't even know how to manipulate mana despite having a literal infinite supply of it and having the strength of Void Rank. Here is a quote from the story. "Athena and Grandmaster Vredral were watching closely as they personally knew how hard it was to manipulate the Law of Fate and be able to discern the fates of entire planets. Yet to Noah, this was the simplest thing as he did not even know how to manipulate mana, much less being able to manipulate the law of fate!"Yep, he doesn't know how to manipulate mana in all this time. I find this very disappointing. The MC gets his infinite mana from the System(Planet Core), uses skills through the system, and ranks up through the system. In an arc where he goes to Atlantis, he kills an invading cultivator and obtains a Law Crystal of Water. These crystals contain the understanding that the cultivator had of the Law of Water. He uses it and guess what...It's a mere percentage for a boost to water-based skills. He might say he 'sees water in a new way', but that's it. The author doesn't go any deeper than that in regards to the law of water and how Noah perceives it. So, in reality, Noah doesn't actually understand any part of the Law of Water.Without the system, he would lose access to almost every single skill he possesses and only retaining the strength of his body which again, was provided mostly by the system.Noah is a puppet to be used by the System, nothing more. I still can't believe he doesn't know how to manipulate mana at the weakest of levels, like what the hell. 4. Dialogue is skipped in places. For example, when Noah discovers he can destroy dungeons he goes to a meeting to discuss what to do next. Do we see this discussion? No, we're told a summary. When Noah goes to the Underworld and talks with the Vampire King and Prince, do we see this discussion? Nope. It's summarized, again.Another moment is when the Cores of Planets talk to each other about new things. We, the readers, do not get to read what they're saying and only told what happened with the discussion afterward.Basically, in short, the potentially interesting dialogue is skipped where it shouldn't be.Conclusion. Reading this story, I really liked it as is obvious by where I read to. I read it non-stop with only short breaks to do other things. I am actually disappointed I had to make this review and see these flaws appear in this novel. I might continue reading after a break from it or I might even drop it. I'm not sure.If you don't care about these flaws, then go ahead and read it. I liked it. If you want a detailed story that brings up interesting concepts, shows interesting characters, and has the MC goes to interesting worlds that he explores then I must disappoint you by saying that this novel isn't that. Far from it. I do not recommend this novel if you want what I stated above.If you read this far, then I hope my review helped you understand this novel.
Gone through. Interesting read.
love this book
I love it..
This Author has set my standards in what I read or look forward to reading in books! Absolutely amazing work I can’t get enough!!!!
This book is on a different level. Author Mise is a Fabulous writer that has her readers hooked from the very first Line of her stories. But this Book hits different for me. I have Loved Kataleya Rossi for so long and can't wait for them both to surrender to their Bond! Beautiful Story
A 5 star book. This book is so unique. The characters are so amazing, the writing is great. Love all the side stories as well. I am definitely rereading once completed. 100% recommended. Great story and pace!
heartbreaking i want the happy ending i want to see them wed oh so sad
Enjoying the story line so far
why is there no updates for several days now? and my bonus points declined drastically. Those points come with my purchase so it should not expire. Are you cheating on us? You leave us hanging after we have spent sk much?
update please