A high quality story that draws your interest in like a succubus in heat and tightly holds your attention. It is fun and thrilling. Instead of being dry, the politics are juicy and full of flavour. I highly recommend reading this novel.
I know this novel has received lot of negative review from many readers but i personally like this novel and give it 5 star.Well yes thr seems to be almost no story plot now and seems strange but i quite like the things that happen in this novel such as the joke they made and seems similar to a setting like Zero no Tsukaima.
Good novel at the start ruined by the Author. Spoilers aheadNow this is gonna be pretty long so stop after this first paragraph if you can't be bothered. Well this novel has only one good point in my opinion and that was the beginning more specifically the word building after that everything was trash. Mc got dumber by the chapter the author did much more dumb **** that made this so much harder to read and his/her lack of good grammar didn't help either now I am no expert but at least I have basic grammar I think.Apart from that this is more to do with the Mc the first few hunting trips he only went out with 2 out of the 5 skills and his friends die oh buhoo he spent 5 days he could have used to get stronger and for revenge crying like a dumb a** now this isn't that bad some people are more emotional than others but come on man his "trauma" is so bad that he kills level 2 bunnies till he's level 12 and it worked out for him really because he got a title which upped his stats and level apart from that he gets the ai helper or what ever and instead of levelling it up bit by bit he decides to wait till he can mass level it. Oh and the funniest thing about that is although the Ai got more info or was allowed to share more info it got a personality while that isn't too bad at the chaos dragon cave it actually impeded him because it was annoyed at him and didn't want to tell him somethings now if it was a dire situation he would have been royally f*cked.Now also this guy has a hidden stat that has a recharge time which is so long it's stupid and he forgets to deactivate and or activate it and the Ai tell him it knows how to make him stronger well I don't know about you but if I had such a stat I would wish for some op monsters to fight be weakened and than be so weak that I can kill them for mass levelling but lucky him it seems the Ai had another way because plot demanded it and it was to get a super special bloodline now man why would you add bloodlines in this like seriously it may just be my preference but when it is battle of ascension and probably humanity has to "ascend" shouldn't they mostly being doing it by them selves and not with help from the other species I mean the vibe I was getting off it was at a point they would have to fight the other races like demons devils etc and if it goes this route if they fight dragons then it doesn't even make sense anymore in my opinion but this bit really is like Is aid my opinion.A part from this guy mistakes this op bloodline for some semi decent potion leave luck on meets love interest that is unlikeable and irritating and the situation end up in one of the only ways that a girl could possibly get close enough to him a see that shrivel of a thing that was good about him with out immediately running a way and trying to forget about him. Also one of the most infuriating things is this guy sells a legendary saber just because he can't use it none of his family can and he wants to open his mothers restaurant. Now I don't know about you but when you're looking for allies or think you are gonna look for allies (this refers to his future plan) you should find a strong saber user and give he/she the saber GOD F*CKING D*AMN IT!Terrible novel good world building at the start ruined by the AUTHOR not the Mc because he created this **** fest.
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Why bring back a dropped novel and keep the ****ty translation? It doesn't matter if the new content is good if you can't get through the first 80 chapters filled with basically MTL quality ****
an epic story of reincarnation elaborated through western perspective, full of sarcasm, lack of content, unrefine plot, weird chinese character naming, but fun to read as it is were user-friendly story for three years old kid, while most of the older reader gave too many complaints making the writer failed to graps the essence of eastern fantasy and made the story more to making-fun on Chinese Imagination, yet its still pique others interest, and eager to wait for another chapter.
Beta male mc. Not my cup of tea. Some issues with phasing. Felt it was bit jumpy from scene to scene. Average writing. If you as a reader like beta male mc then its worth a try.
Overall great but with a few flawswriting quality-Again, I am a speed reader and i rarely spot grammar or spelling issues. But from what I've seen (and remember) it is pretty damn good.Stability-For someone writing about another successful fanfic the update rate is fantastic. Though i wish bleached multiverse comes back...story development-Good but somehow feels rushed. He went from greenhorn graduate to superhuman real quick. Don't make me mention the romance. Sure you are going to remedy it by making fillers but still.Character design-Well while the MC can be like a jack in the box. His main personality is his determination and drive. He has experienced getting a friend taken by him cause he was powerless. The feeling of being a 'commodity' so this drives him to become stronger. The scientist past life only makes it stronger.But Yan Mei is kinda shallow Crybaby tsundere when first introduced. Naive thinker (the one with children begging) aside from that her personality isn't set in stone.Hina on the other hand her recent story with the nobles feels like it is her way of coping to be joking and all. But it doesn't explain why when that one guy touched her she literally sliced the guy's hand off. I know she's only been in for a few chaps so I'm gonna cut you some slack. Her reason for being in love with MC is clear too it must've felt like herself back then wanting to become stronger but her maybe for revenge but MC to protect himself and his family (pure speculation)World Background-Pretty damn good. I ain't gonna lie but i rarely fully read world building chapters or just skim through it. So I'm not a good judge.Btw. I feel like you are an author that sneakily establishes the OPness not just bestows it all at once.
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Great book, but should capture more of the dugout antics in baseball, like rally caps and stuff. There’s a bunch of videos on youtube of MLB players messing around in the dugout to get ideas from
I have read the open chapters but I don't have money to read the rest.
Fellow Game Genre Author Here! I have my own book that I'm writing in this genre with a similar start and I can tell this author is going to take a new route and divert from cliches. At least that's what I see so far @3 chapters. I wanted to take my game novel a different route and I am happy to see that someone else is doing the same! I am very curious to see how innovative this book gets. Because we need creativity and fresh ideas.As for the update frequency, it's still too early to tell but I will add to my collections so I know when he updates.His writing, story development and character are looking good so far.As for world building, I hope to see more in the future. I want to see how he builds his/her game world.It's still too early to tell if we will be getting a proper game world so I will not deduct any star for that at the moment.It's a thumbs up from this bro!