After reading all 40 chapters I am giving my review I am giving it a 5-stars.I really enjoyed the story I want more of it.I hope it gets picked up soon but sadly it didn't get picked up.Feeling sad now
I have never been into this kind of stories before so I thought that I would leave it hanging from the first chapter but once I started reading it, I was proved wrong. To put it simply, this book was very interesting and.. original! It was well thought of. The character design, the story development and all the other details screamed 'Get hooked on me!' So, hats off to our talented author!
There are a phew spelling mistakes but other than that I really enjoyed it. Although it can be a bit confusing as some points. And I'm waiting for the next chapter as it's so good and I want to find out what happens next!
the story isn't that fast nor slow I think it's on the right track the story doesn't enter the game in the first chapter it's great that you put a backstory before the mc even went to play the game
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this is so wrong..y isnt good novel get good attention..??!!!y..??y..?y..i badly need new novel with new genre..recently webnovel keep pushing that so called stupid FL and richess ML and i am damn so tired of it..i do like FL lead novels..but not same plot all over again..n.. A VERY BIG THANKS TO U FOR THIS NOVEL..!!!n what important is..it keep making u want to read more..p/s: bout the shameless..dont be..shy peoples wont go anywhere..be bold..
What is the problem with qidian, in the past we had great novels like LOTM or RTW , even the others novels, if wasn't great at least had personality enough to be recognised but now only one novel doesn't change the names and I don't even say about the fact that 99% of this novels are copy from each other.
Look at these old men, rating it 1 star for having a harem. Legit, in the synopsis, "surrounded by beauties."If you don't like harem and already read the synopsis, go away and read something else. No need to rate it 1 star. Plus, harems aren't the only factors in a story so rating it 1 star is just prejudice.God damn scums.
Supeppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppper underrated novel, though needs a bit of polishing in the writing department if the author does that he is golden
I’ll say this is like a high quality mtl. Heck, it is mtl and not translated by a translator. Chapter title of chapter 5 itself speaks that its a mtl and even the content speaks to me that its mtl. Cushion is translated sometimes as a futon and seriously at least try to be consistent with the translation terms. Its unbearably annoying and hard to read. Webnovel’s trial reads as a whole is already going downhill and they dont even mask their greed for money at this point. You want people to pay money to read A MTL!!!! Are you SERIOUS?????
Overall, the plot is solid, and I really love the uniqueness of this novel. What stands out the most is how the disciples, especially Xu Yan (the first disciple), get most of the screen time and handle all the classic “Er Gen MC” moments, while the actual MC stays in the background as a powerful and mysterious master. It’s a refreshing twist.As for the translation, it’s generally good, but the inconsistency in names can be frustrating. Sometimes, it feels like even the translator (or maybe the author) gets confused about who’s talking, leading to the wrong name being used. Thankfully, the context and the distinct personalities of the characters make it easy to figure out who’s actually speaking.Another issue is the inconsistency with names for techniques, locations, and realms. For example, the “Great Zhou” country is suddenly called “Da Zhou” in the next chapter. While it means the same thing, it was confusing at first. In later chapters, “Dao” is sometimes translated as “The Way,” which is technically accurate, but I’d prefer it to stay as “Dao” for consistency.There’s also some mix-up between terms like “Realm” and “Domain,” which isn’t a huge deal but still highlights the inconsistency. On top of that, weapons get mistranslated a lot. For instance, Xu Yan uses a sword and Meng Chong uses a knife, but Meng Chong’s knife often gets translated as “sword,” “blade,” or “saber.” I’m guessing this is because all those terms can fall under “sword” in some translations, but it’s still annoying.The cultivation realm of Master, Grandmaster and Great Grandmaster also soemtimes take time to figured out which is being referred to which. Because Grandmaster is higher than Master but Great Grandmaster is equal to Grandmaster in some case.Overall, it’s a great story with some minor translation hiccups.