Beautiful story, and character description. the setting is also good. Love a good vengeance story.
one of the stories that tempted me to spend my money! (and i did) it’s a super slow burn with a lot of roller coaster of plots going on. author dived into the depth of each characters with their own importance into the many plots that’s revolved around the mc alone. mc is the all-rounder, tho with a bit flaw but that’s normal. i hope there’s a bit character development for certain characters. love this so far!
The novel is fantastic. The system, Alice, is very unique and different from the other system novels which I have seen hundreds of. This is definitely on my favorite top 5. My favorite of all the novels he/she have written. All of the characters are fantastic. The quality of this novel is top. You should try it out and see if you like it. This is all I have to say because I'm not good with words. I also like the newly picture there.
It is currently one of my favorite publishing books. The only issue I have sometimes is that chapters are a bit short, but otherwise, this book is pretty good. One of my favorite things about this book is how the MC is not training manic but is lazy, undetermined, and does the bare minimum at the beginning, but after like 50 chapters, he understands the value of power and grows up and becomes a determined hardworking person. The MC is basically just a normal kid, who is really talented at the start.
Ok overall. The author does not put himself in the seat of the reader so it's lead to a lot BUT a Lot of incomprehensions and make you feel that the Mc have lost a bit of his brain.
Transmigation+Eroge Game+ Yandere Girls+ Ince stuous Tendency+ Beastmen +Loli + Older Women + Other Dangerous Heroines + Beastwomen = Woahhh fckng awesome!!
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This book is extremely exciting. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters There are many different things in the story ranging from worst to the best. Comedy, drama, action thrill suspence and many more. Beside the story line the author had also included the auxiliary volume which helps in better understanding of the characters and chapters.
So: a really good premise and an interesting ability. Special forces and an ability that can multiply or reduce the laws of physics and other peoples powers, which gives a solid base to build a story on.Character design: Starts out really good, the MC seems well thought of. But then the "legal loli" appears and he turns into a horn dog. She pampers him, he is - this close to fudging her and what the heck happened to my nice story and the good premise?World Background: Actually great, well thought of and interesting.Writing Quality: Pretty good for a Webnovel.
I had to re-read a few starting chapters to jog my memory haha!Anyways, people who are wondering if this book is good or not, it is from Elyon, need I say anything else? --Spoiler Alert. Read at your own risk--After reading almost about 25 chaps in advance, all I can say is...Eriol and Lux are the best boys!!Ahem, as I was saying if you've read RWTSS from Elyon, you would know that the writing quality that you'll find in this novel will be TOP TIER! Characters are unique and diverse. I especially liked the dynamic between Lux and his grandmother. The characters feel alive and not just 1-dimensional.This will be a Necromancy-themed book as our mc is a necromancer and a summoner. Even if necromancy is not your cup of tea, I still recommend you to try out this book.You won't get too much action from him at the start coz he's weak rn and still finding his way in the new world.Talking about the world, I found the world very vast. The lore is rich and the story is just developing! The RPG style elements that Elyon (The author!) added to the story gave it a different and unique vision.The story doesn't have too much comedy and is more on the serious side, but that doesn't mean there are absolutely no jokes. Read the first 2 chapters and you'll get me.All in all, I think it's a great book that every fantasy and LitRPG fan should give a try. Thank you, Elyon for my new source of enjoyment, and best of luck to you for this year's WSA!
I've only read only the free chapters which are about chapter 51 at the time that I'm writing this review. If you like smooth writing, mmorpg, fighting, grinding, type of novel then this is for you. Writing Quality: You can pretty much read this novel smoothly and there's little to none info dump so that's 5/5. Stability of Updates: Although I've only read the free chapters, I always get notified for updates so it's pretty stable 5/5,World Background: It has unique classes or "path" as they call it here and it seems like every person have their own unique classes. So far this seems like a western fantasy with goblins, dungeons, elves, dragons, and etc. In these 50 chapters, they haven't talked about kingdoms, who's against who, famous adventurers, or anything but it has hinted about factions. But I still give a 5/5 cause it's kinda interesting for me.Story Development: The story is going well for the first 40 chapters but to me, it felt like the plot was forced when they went in a dungeon so 4/5.Character Design: Characters have unique classes, especially MC. MC's class is pretty fun and gives a lot of freedom to let the one who owns the class be creative. However, when they were about to go to a dungeon, it felt like the MC who was being developed in the first 40 chapters went into ruin at least to me. In the first 40 chapters, the MC was portrayed as an eloquent, smart, reckless but on another side of the coin can be seen as courage type of guy. But when they went into the dungeon, it felt like he gave up easily. Overall: I would recommend this novel for people who likes mmorpg stuff.