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Did the author dropped the novel??????
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It's really great to read till now! I have only read till chapter 4 and will update the review as I read future updates. Author please update like this!!4 chapters a day!!!
Man, I came over your story by chance. I read a chapter 1 and I'm half with him .. so I hope to continue, I will put your story in the library...
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Author here! My review score accurately reflects my feeling on my story. If you like deep world building, strong character designs, clear character growth, and a completely flushed out plot you have come to the right story.The proof I can give you is the first two chapters are the ending point for volume 1. With a clear end point in place all that there is to do is fill in the blanks. I will also be frank. My grammar and spelling can be rough. I hope you will look past it and try to just enjoy the story.The book may start out slow but it will pick up in pace later on. There is a lot of background to build and a lot of moving pieces to generate and tie together.The story will continue forward to get to the tournament as I release chapters. However, there will also be plenty of flashbacks / cut scenes to flush out the story arcs dealing with James's parents, the lab, and the organization known as Black Death. I am a fan of video games and mysteries and I want to tie the two genres together in one place. Please be patient and enjoy my story. The chapter word count I am targeting is between 1,500 at the lowest to 3,500 at the highest. Ideally it will be closer to 2,000 words per chapter. The only reasons why a chapter's length would be around the 1,500 count is if I have to split a super long chapter in half or I get too busy on the weekend.I look forward to your input and comments!
Like the story it's pretty good and I love how the cover picture is a Magic the Gathering card.I dont know what else to write to reach 140.??
the beginning is pretty bad, you have no idea what is happening, the mind picture is unclear, overall bad beginning nejdkdkkdkdkdkkddkk
I really tried to get into this story. But it is so odd. Suppose to be a game world but it feels more like forced government recuirtment experimentation with possibly population control. The A.I. forces the MC into a female body with a female name even tho its suppose to be illegal for gender-bending by government law. The MC says he wants to be masculine but makes no effort to do so. Suppose to be a mech novel but all ive seen so far is mutation and really stupid plot armor.
a lot of inconsistencies and plot holes that make no sense