I love that the MC wants natural growth and self hard work. The world was vast & mysterious. There's so much going on and had various factors for the plot but its not jumbled and the story flow so well. I cant stop reading.
author the mc could be more proactive with the girls , he has to be an alpha not a dense protagonist author the mc could be more proactive with the girls , he has to be an alpha not a dense protagonist
THE PACE IS SLOW, IT GOT BORING. PLS DONT DRAG THE STORY.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
At first, I was like here we go... another story of someone reincarnating and going into a VR game and taking advantage. However, I must say that I am hooked. Good writing that is easy to follow what's going on. While we do have an arrogant MC, it makes sense in the story. While he does have great fortune early on, it's not like he is completely OP. It is a good read to add to the library.
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Super funny and amazing novel please more chapters ??? keep writing ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Please continue, so far Im loving the idea, how you made Fresh, and Im honestly exited at what he will dk next, will he be good or bad, just explore and do nothing? Or meaby find so.e big secret about AUs? Also wondering what would happen if he meets any Gasters or other characters like flowery or chara. Overall, amazing, must read, trust me, I too was skeptical at first, thinking whether this was good or bad, but now having read it I can confidently say that it is amazing with a great original plot forming. Keep up the good work author.
I like they way the story starts off, it's mysterious and intriguing. I will say the jumping from different view points at the beginning did throw me off slightly, but that's a minor personal preference. Good job author, keep it up!
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Honestly an amazing novel. It really gripped me, amazing character design and wonderful story development. I hope Author Dweia continues to use this amazing world in future novels. ??
really good more please not a lot of warhammer 40k on this app :(