Dickgrayson96
I really liked this but i feel like a lot of things are missing, we didn't have a wedding chapter, nor a kiss of Lapis and Profesor Hill and a lot of things more.
Anyway, thanks for translating :)
Thank you
This novel reminds me of my time on seminar where I would only know one thing from a big topic and I would expand that thing again and again and again until my teacher says time out. The novel is just like that.
There are too much B.U.L.L Crap in between, while reading I was screaming inside "GET TO THE POINT".
Clearly the author only thought about the word count rather than the story.
For the people who had annoying girlfriend in the past who talks constantly about the same damn thing for an hour then don't read this. It will bring out bad memories.
It's sooo sad ...the book has been stopped. It's not going to be updated anymore...???
Author kindly let us know...ur book was very nice n very interesting story.
It's the translation. It's a top tier story and the naming makes sense lore wise.
I loved it only song story tho
Try God of Crime: the strongest mafia, its from the same author of son of the hero king
Part 2
Ohhh and worst of fucking all.. the douche of a writer loves to start spoiling his own fucking writing.. literally and I’m not talking about little side notes or messages at the end of chapters.. nah he does it in the middle of shit, just to point out this is important fact but it’s not, it it just vaguely says he’s going to be ruler and king blah blah blah stuff, like random characters keep talking about the MCs “destiny” constantly.. so I don’t feel like I’m enjoying it as much.. like the writer really didn’t try at all, everything is just generic copies, I don’t feel imagination, It feels more closely related to our views of mythology and gods and stuff.. not a fantasy manga about a vr video game..
Honestly speaking this could’ve been a masterpiece, being my 2nd fav but clearly this writer doesn’t have the talent TBATE has with the beginning after the end..
he gonna do that?? ong???? WWWW
After somewhere starting from 180-190 ----> some of the paragraphs in the ch just have been copy pasted and same lines are repeated twice during same chapter. First i thought i was going senile and having dementia, but backtracking and confirming this i noticed the this started to happen more often after 180-190 ch
Yeah but it’s not a direct copy, both are still two different novels just with the same system.
The author dropped it and stopped translating it. The og was 1500+ chapters
