shameless author here rating his own book a five out five. anyways this review is about what this book is gonna be its'sa high stakes action-fantasy with a lot of emotional and heartfelt moments mixed together with the horror that the inhumans(what the monsters in this series is called) and the morality of gifts and the weight of decisions. also this is gonna be a multi-pov series and the story will be told through the eyes of three people mainly 'aelric calyx' is the first the other two right now are unnamed and will be explored in a manner similar to him all three of them will be used to show a different perspective of the same world and will be chasing their own goals.is it gonna be bloody? absolutely it will be very, very bloody but not meaninglessly.what is the magic system? I will answer it after chapter five! if you have any other questions feel free to ask i will try my best to answer them
Not too shabby if I still say so myself?
Good start, has potential... But Author, when are you releasing more chapters?
event fp................................
The story is great, the pacing doesn't feel rushed or slow and the dual perspectives really enhance the reading experience...... Keep going like this and readers will love your book soon.
I was intrigued by the description and reviews and it didn't disappoint.
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
The story has the potential to be a good story, but the writing is bad, lots of spelling mistakes, lack of world building and character development.
Story is good so far. It looks like mix of mmrpg and system. Have to see how it progresses.I like the system oriented novels like dragon system, reincarnated as ice dragon with system, reincarnated with strongest system They were fun so checked with this.
the boom is good. I like the author. feed our addiction give us more!!
it started about healing for the first 25 to 30 chapters. Then, it became all about fighting and seamed as if the MC used healing as a secondary.
loving this novel, not overly fast paced or slow paced. The pov switches aren't forced, and although it doesnt have a lot of chapters now im sure the upcoming ones will be even better!