Good start power system is very interesting zero seems like a cool character even though it’s his first scene looks very promising story telling
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
The author unleashed his writing superpowers in this novel. It is action-filled and I find Li Fei *cool*Highly recommended and I can't wait for another update
So far there are four chapters which are all really solid, the story seems to be developing steadily and is really a fun read. (if Hailey Welch can blow up this novel/book best blow up as well)
How can authors ruin the story with one chapter is beyond my understanding… Dont get me wrong, the novel is great, good read, but why the f… When the general is treathening MC, he just flops and joins the military just cuz his sister was kidnapped??? And then the story for me just went downhill… i mean The MC just 10 chapters ago understood that the worlds are merging, and he is strong af, but he flops under the first pressure?? Thats just idiotic development. Up to 140 chapters are really tood read and then i just can’t read stupidity.
It's an intriguing story with well writtencharacters. I highly recommend it.
Its an ok novel, however the MC is just so unlikeable and foolish to the extent you just want to shake him and say Think you freaking fool.His decisions are based on his original pathetic persona and everything forward is just rehashing the earlier chapters. A smart MC could use his new system in many ways, even establishing, dare I say, a harem. Get the affections to 95 then enjoy the rewards they are willing to offer in all facets. He had been dealt a harsh reality check but his not comprehending this is really depressing.Overall, it isnt much fun, there is no joy being seen and, I keep harping on it, the guy is a f*#king loser, just wondering if he swings the other way as he hasn’t thought once about bedding them.Unless the story narrative changes I recommend a pass on this novel, you will only end up being annoyed. Mind you if you are already a forelorn simp then have at it.
get full Stars from me because it deserves it, In the beginning the FL is a bit naive and seems to be really young in her way of thinking but i like it in some way because her growth is great in the story, the other main characters are well done too and the story is nice to read so 5/5
The story is interesting . Keep up the good work.
1st mission: “Penalty for failure: Death”The story is great but the author really has no idea how to create tension. Every single character will be railroaded into a forced path and there will be no decission making, you will always know what will happen next. However it is at least an decently interesting path.Great story and concept. But the author just never leaves any possibility for alternate paths or ”what if” questions. Anything important was always going to happen the exact way it happened because the author only left one path for the story to continue.
Such an interesting book not only in its world building and character development but in the character’s dialogue. Their conversations pull you in and you feel like you’re listening in on something you shouldn’t be.?I also like how Cass’ line of reasoning isn’t nonexistent and actually resembles basic human psychology. Overall really good and well developed and I’m on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update. Please keep up the phenomenal work author nim!
So from what I have read. The story is pretty decent. Characters are fleshed out and there is a world that I am eager to explore. But I believe that there are quite a few grammar and sentence structure mistakes. The mistakes really take the immersion out of the reading. I hope the author improves on his mistakes. But other than that, I am enjoying this story.