This is honestly just my personal opinion. I enjoyed the first 150 or so chapters, but the further it went the more conflicted the story felt. where I've left off there are alot of holes and confusing/conflicting concepts starting to go through the blender and it simply killed my interest in the story. Don't get me wrong I'm all for other worlds and magic/cultivation type things, i just feel like it was overstuffed, leaving a lot of loose ends that are essentially kicked out/cut by way of a time skip. the confusion then continues on from there with alternate dimensions as well as other worlds, not to mention the whole "this is all a book/novel come to life
The most disgusting novel I have ever seen.Whoever haves these ideas should just die and have their entire being obliterated.Absolutely disgusting novel
Everything is excellent so far. The only problem with the novel is that the updates are slow but since the chapters are big and the author might have IRL stuff to do so I won't complain much. I also like the fact that the author makes the illustrations by himself. The illustrations are amazing. Keep up the work author.
5 Star for no harem.
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one of the best historical danmei i've ever read
Amazing imagination. I am afraid that such things could really happen in the future. Who knows. The story is great and you get into it really fast. Great work author ?❤
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I dont want to read about a child growing up being a idiot about everything he does. I want to read about an MC who knows their ****. If you want a slow read with a MC thats dumb as f@#$ here you go.
Same old faceslapping as always and on top of it is a System story...................................................................
It's only got five chapters (or four if the first chapter was a prologue) but it feels distinctive from others stories I've read. I mean, "we can't have our own zombie apocalypse so make it on VR world so the virus won't spread into our real world."Anyway, everything is in a good state, especially the scenes with guns and booms... if you can describe it more "gore-ly" and add more blood, it will be much better. The characters seems unique, and the AI as well.Overall, good job.
even though it has markers of the general genre of transmigration, it has a bit of flavour of its own, broadens the genre in its own way. the character and story fit very well , nicely paced development that a reader can follow
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