Pizzailla
The story is too rushed making the story too clutered and annoying to read......................................................................................
The translator did a wonderful job, but this story was personally a disappointment compared to OEM, Transcending the Nine Heavens, and Realms in the Firmament. The main character starts off hard as nails, and intelligent, but he rapidly regresses within the following chapters. Also, his family is rather unintelligent in general. But the translation quality is good, so there is that.
so far a great story with an interesting concept of an interactive webnovel. defiantly worth a read as you can actually change the direction of the story.
has high potential can't wait to see more
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This pick came to me like a breath of fresh air after long time the poor mc facing hardship every dayi n a crazy soypouder family while cursing gaya is hella funny and doing undead crusades every day punishing the undead and granting them eternal rest while fucking the shit out of vampires and beasts being a necromancer and a preist at the same time summoning holy undead making holy water lakes which was supposed to be death swamp firing away his divine musket rifle which was meant for exercise used by noble ladies to lose some fat the mc try his best to be the friendly neighborhood gravekeeper busting the heads of the zombies with the legendary shovel will keep you entertained untill you realize you caught up and almost screamed shit out waking up your neighbors and they find a home break goind downstairs but the son of bitch ran a way like a marathon runner and he was wearing orange ? best shit of the weak?
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everything is good so far i have read up to 132 chapters and the writing quality,stability of updates,battle systems and world backgroun were pure gold this is the best novel i have read so far
The story is great but the constant badmouthing against religions makes this book unreadable@author: please try being more respectful and open-minded
Alright guys, as the author, I'll be shameless enough to rate my novel 5 stars, hehe. This novel has just started, I'll be mostly focusing on Story Development and Character Design, I want to make the characters as vibrant as possible, each with their own thoughts. The starting of this novel has no adversaries for the MC, he just cultivates to be a genius, after all he'll be a kid in the start. Anyway can't put much spoilers here, hope you'll have fun reading it.Guaranteed 7 chapters a week. Cheers. hehe.If i miss, please remind me about it in the latest chapter comments. Happy reading.
I read the chàpters.. and it's very interesting...kinda heartbreaking to see Alpha creed dying... Intrigued to read more.....
hey author I am big fan...️of your writing ...I have a request can you please update new chapter I had purchased bonus but now it is going to expired in a day ...️I know I am being selfish but I don't want to miss new chapter ...️I am not forcing you at last decisions is in yours hands..
