My Man! What a crazy story! To tell the true..... this is the most innovative story i saw in the last months. Please do continue to surprise me author!!!!!!!
I pay my respect for the perseverance of the dude that did the petition, I saw him everywhere I turned on WN.so congratulations for a wishe granted ?
Pretty good it’s just sometimes he switches the pronouns I mean I know English is not his First language but sometimes it’s a little much when they get switched
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I read all the chapters in one go today. It was quite nice. I really want the author to complete this ASAP so I can again read this whole thing in one go and savour it.
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The MC was ok in the beginning with an ok background and a cool OP ability and all that. The MC finds a cave with a lot of cool stuff in it that I found interesting then he decides to go into town and read up on the history of the world he was in. He then decides to go to an auction which is okay I guess,like he probably has better stuff anyway but ok. Then he buys some demon girl for "information" and I thought it would be cool if he becomes his servant or bodyguard or something like that but no,she becomes his love interest or something which doesn't make any sense considering of his history and the girls! I guess the author wanted to make him softer so he did thisor author wanted romance in the first place and didn't do it well. All in all the plot was interesting and I liked the MC in the beginning but after the romance started it messed with plot and just made MC and the girl really annoying,in short romance was forced and it wasn't enjoyable after that.
Alright i can’t fkin take it anymore. I’ve read up to the current chapter 83 and while I enjoyed it at the start, the MC has some severe mental retardation and ADHD. He goes on and on about how he needs to be stronger and this and that to the point where *SPOILER* his parents die right in front of him. Instead of using his 2 bases FULL of resources to sit down and cultivate, he decides to wander the fking world and comes across another dungeon. He literally cant sit still at all to cultivate and icnreSe his power. He’s been given this holy grail of cultivation and skills and a body suited for cultivation but does NOTHING with it. It took him an entire year before he even decided to cultivate to start. Now, he keeps getting his butt handed to him by creatures a rank hogher than him but he does nothing to cultivate into the next rank. He has this faulty logic that somehow skills will make him stronger but the author goes on to prove how wrong that idea is because the gap between servant and noble rank creatures is, AND I QUOTE, “100times more pwoerful” and even a fraction of the aura these moble creatures let out just forces all servant ranks to kneel. they are completely helpless against it, so you’d think he’d focus on breaking theough to the next rank? Especially since he’s at the peak right before the next rank, right? NO he just cant fkin sit still and cultivate and power through the beginning phase of cultivation. The start of cultivation novels should always go quickly but the author spends so much time just absolutely wasted on pointless stuff when clearly personal power matters the most. idk man this novel has compeltely frustrated me and I think the author is ruining a good setup and world he built.he even gets saved not once not teice but 3 fking times bY this random godly chick with an umbrella and he’s forced into submission and frozen every time. He legit cant do anything and he’s being shown over and over that personal strength and power matters the most but he refuses to sit down and cultivate. StorY: 2/5 (Great premise but ruined by author with dumb decisions)Character: 0/5 (idiot MC that complains endlessly but does zero to improve perosnal power while having s golden spoon)Writing: 4/5 (decent grammer few mistakes)Plot: 3/5 (ruined by author with dumb decisions)Updates: 3/5 (1ch a day or every few days so it’s average and nothing special)
Overall very interesting be it plot or story but do beware that this kind of MC is not for everyone, if you like righteous MC who would at least try to save someone in trouble, if he could just by snapping his finger then you came to the wrong place WRONG PLACE I say, if that's not what you want then go read this book already you don't need to know more than this!!!Ps:I deleted original review bc it's 2am and I wrote like 20 mistakes
I’m not exactly good at writing review, so I translated one of the highest rated Kingdom’s Bloodline reviews at the Chinese Qidian forum. There are some minor *SPOILER* so read it with risks. --------------------------------------A very interesting book. To simply put, this is a novel about transmigrating to a fantasy world that has its own fictional history at the end of the Medieval Age. I saw a lot of advertisements in the book review area and there was really nothing to discuss. So I want to write something to express my feelings so far. Many people say that the protagonist is too weak, and the development of the story has too much pressure and *******. However, this is indeed the most interesting aspect of this novel. Different from the general concept of webnovels, in which the protagonists basically farm monsters and grind for levels, really straightforward. The protagonist of this book began as a beggar for a living, and cautiously survived under the control of the criminal gang. Then he became the only living prince of the kingdom by chance (perhaps inevitable). Then, just like a person holding the only torch in a black forest. Little by little, collecting the bits and pieces of this world, Under the force of history, or you could say under the mutual political game of several major factions behind the curtain, the protagonist almost always uses language (Yes! The power of words) and cautious analysis to overcome one difficulty after another, of course, the novel also gives the protagonist the life-saving mystic power. This book is interesting for the following points: We can think of this novel built by the author as a long lasted history. Through the eyes of the protagonist, you could hear the content, you could restore the truth behind history little by little. I am very happy that author can use different POVs to provide each piece of information about the world, rather than giving them out directly like a God. Secondly, it is very interesting to hear the history told by different characters of the same period, to see whether it is true or false, because of their view-points, their ideologies, their roles in the age they were in, to provide the protagonist with difference information. And the most interesting aspect, I myself don't expect or hope for the protagonist to become some kind of a powerful person.I care more about the history that was dusted thousands of years ago, the truth that was concealed in the scrolls of history, the political collusion behind it, the humanity, and the spirit of sacredness and nobleness. In addition, the authors try to shape everyone into a unique character. Everyone has to obey the command of someone/or something higher up that they have to accept, but they also have their own little thoughts. Just like in the book when Black Sword was lying in the cold snow with wounds all over his body, but he only longed for a dirty girl in his hometown, who *****ly asked him how the northlanders raise the pig. Just like how the former White Blade general opened a pub after the battle 12 years ago, living like a neighbor's uncle, but always in his heart, he keep a respect for history. Each character is not a black and white image, with his choices and abandonment, with the reasons for his action and the softness of his heart. I like this world, it brings us more truthful feelings. The most gratifying thing is what I can't see it at all: For example, the protagonist being soft when seeing a woman, and then the woman who became his lover turned into a flower vase or had inexplicable surge of strength. For example, the enemy who has no need to be provocative got their face slapped, and then when their grandpas discovered this, continued to be provocative and also got their face slapped, and then.... For example, after talking about some shocking statement (modern thought), the protagonist inexplicably got the appreciation of some big man from the higher up, and then…. For example, what I hate most is that when the protagonist knew that there was a gap in strength between him and the enemy, he still had to make it difficult and forcefully jump forward. Then he said "just bite my teeth, risk my life
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