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People who are going to read this work, I recommend continuing until much later, the work starts a little confusing but improves as it goes on and I can confirm that the improvement, although slow, is noticeable in future chapters.
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Very interesting premise. Would highly recommend
This is another level of interesting story, waiting for the rest of the story kudos to the author ?. This is another level of interesting story, waiting for the rest of the story kudos to the author ?.
Brother this is wild,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,You got me hooked,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Your novel has potential,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Really great novel overall but my only problem is the story is slower than I thought (for me I guess
One of the interesting stories I’ve read so far.
amazing chapters can't wait for the whole story ?
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The opening of chapters and starting f the novel is very good. It shows how the writers wants us to get caught in the adventure with the mcAnd we surely are having start.Plus the writing is good as it is developing in every chapter.Good book author... keep it up.
I pretty cool book to put ur time into...Am not usually into this kinds of books but who's counting no one so I love it and I hope you could too
The story is interesting for those who like stories about the gacha system and clan building. Hopefully the MC gets married and has children because on average MCs who become clan leaders rarely have children.
