I shouldn't need to pay to read at 11 chapters. ???????????????????
it seem not bad at first when you read the 40 chapter but just a head it become all hail china extermination of the island country (yeah like always) other country are pictured as extremely malycious (you didn't even see a move from the other country...) china is the best and other country get destroyed by the true awakening of spirit energy but it's nothing much they can kill the beast with there missile and gun and other country cannot... (lol) so whole world got destroyed
This novel has several problems and most of them come from the fact that the protagonist keeps the memories of the past life. after reading about 200 chapters I can say that the author has no idea what he was doing and seems to have gotten lost. the fact that the protagonist has the memories of his past life, did nothing but make him weaker mentally and a person who seems to be bound by the laws and cultures of his past life, I didn't see any benefits from having the memories of the previous life. and that only made him pathetic. all this just to spend hundreds of chapters for "evolution" of the protagonist.
I absolutely love the characters, especially the teacher! I will be reading every chapter and some say that my personality is somewhat like the teacher as well! This is my favorite novel so far out of this entire app and I hope the author is able to keep up the good quality
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The story is getting interesting more and more. Author I want to know whether this is vampire or Werewolf or ghost story. Waiting for Ur next update
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A non-berserk berserker!? how incredibly rare! It's a pretty interesting story so far which is saying something because I'm not really into gaming novels. My only complaint is that we don't have games like this in real life.
Hi it's me again (Noobamstard). Currently I read chapter 1-10. The story looks like it is going to be a weak to strong type in which the MC trains up in another world while he is asleep. The MC is a resident of the slums in which the majority of the population of this world lives. He randomly gains a system that gives him acces to a game like world. The world background is decent. It is to early to talk about story developement. The MC seems to be the carefree type that classifies things he gets as "trash" or "OP" which is kind of confusing since his sitiuation as a poor buffon in the slums that has to shoulder the responsibility for his little sister stands in contrast to such behaviour. The grammar is substandard but okay given that this is Webnovel. Still I recommend an editor (it can be a friend that is as good as you with English but two pairs of eyes see more than one). Anyhow I am still exited about this story and will likely read on. However, there is one thing that is bugging me: Why is your novel uploaded twice on Webnovel? I will not continue giving feedback before that is solved. Having this novel twice will ultimatley upset your readers and stop you from advancing in the rankings. Keep on writing,Noobamstard
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I hope this gets picked up I find it humorous and well translated. I really enjoy the MC's jpurney so far and I LOLed a few times and I find that to be a good sign for a story.