It has good writing style and a little good plot but here mc is little passive about heroine's and system is not written well,mainly the favourability thing is written very bad and mc is overly dramatic about protagonist and same goes for side characters so yea I can't say it's bad but not good either
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It's well written with a good pace. Characters so far are likeable. Stands out from other cliche novels of this genre.
High hopes for this one & hopefully consistent uploads.
I like this novel quite a lot . The writing quality is excellent the story development is quite good as everything is connected, every character has different personalities so they have a hint of realism not your typical 2d although the girls easily fall for him they take time to accept the relationship.Updates are on point and currently we have not yet travelled to another world but we have got previews of what is to come .The only problem which I have is maybe my personal problem , which is mc is too soft hearted and very passive.Like I know you don't need to kill everyone everytime but sometimes you need to get proper revenge because they deserve it ,for example ,the enemies of mc almost killed him,tried to r@pe his lovers and friends many times, did way to many horrible deeds that definately deserve death but mc got soft,and mc many times is repulsed by the fact of torturing of most irredemible villains, also he leaves his lifelong opponents who destroyed his everything just because of women , honestly it's kind of irritating when you don't get proper revenge. He can easily take revenge by using his resources and lovers but he doesn't,I don't know why he is just waiting for them to do something against him. Other than my personal problem everything is amazing just hoping that mc can get a little cold hearted for his enemies. But I am sure you gonna enjoy it cause iIam still reading it .
MC is extremely shameless and selfish. I really can’t stand his personality. someone will help him out and ask him for help later on, and he just lies. It’s really annoying
I would have given it more stars but this story just gives so much Deja Vu that I might puke.
It is Pure cliché.
Like what can even do about it .
Overall, this was a great read. The personalities of the characters have been perfectly meshed out in my opinion and the main cast are repeatedly shown, unlike some other novels where they just get forgotten or vanish for some time. The main character surprisingly has a brain which was a sharp contrast to the novels i have read till now. He doesn't hesitate to use his money, kill people, use his influence and relationships to his own benefit. I feel like the buildup of the first meeting of the mc and the fml is getting a bit dragged out but it's going to be resolved soon anyways. The world background is actually pretty good. I especially liked the unique magic system used in this novel which was pretty innovative as compared to the novels where the people simply have to imagine doing the magic or make some circles. The only problem I've had with the novel so far is the updating stability. The chapters are released at an extremely slow pace and there isn't even a fixed schedule for it. Only 2 chapters are released in a month which makes it look like it'll take years to even finally let Eva and Rayne meet. If the chapter release was even like 2 per week, I'd rate this a 10/5.
Great! just read the free chapters. i like the direction of the story. a normal mc that grinds but has talent. i also like the pacing. the games arent too long and over done but have enough detail to make you feel like you're really in it too with the mc. i'm excited to see where the story goes!!
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At first I thought this wasn't going to be that great of a LN. After reading the first several chapters I really wasn't all that into it due to some lame parts of the story. HOWEVER after chapter 40 it became much much better and became a LN that keeps me wanting more to read. It really did change into a much better story from chapter 40 up to the current translated chapter 75. I really do suggest to give it a good read.