Good one .
great read
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I don't usually write reviews for stories I'm reading, as opinions are highly subjective, and perhaps we could discuss objective aspects of a book. Even five-star reviews can contain criticisms. This is more of a frustrated outburst with potential spoilers.
The story stands out due to its unique approach to an isekai concept, focusing on literature and culture rather than character development. The protagonist is somewhat bland, and the story relies on superficial action to maintain interest, but this tactic becomes unsustainable after a brief period. The portrayal of early European societies as backward with inadequate arts and culture, rescued by a generic fantasy novel, is problematic. The author attempts to convey philosophy using clichéd examples, which feels shallow considering the story's theme.
Another issue is the handling of demons and other races, portrayed as easily reconciled with humans solely because the protagonist's book declares them friends. Their explosive nature and past devastation are overlooked, which is implausible for a serious narrative. The story also exhibits favoritism towards a 'Mary Sue' race that excels at everything, while other characters like elves receive minimal development, causing disappointment.
The technological advancements, however, are a redeeming aspect, as they're grounded in realistic innovation rather than quick fixes. The characters, unfortunately, are a major weakness. Most are one-dimensional or exaggerated, with a weak yandere character struggling due to her upbringing, despite her noble status. The Beast Girl lacks depth and falls in love based on arbitrary rules. Characters like Adeli, the half-breed princess, and Arwen the Elf Queen, despite potential, remain underdeveloped due to the author's focus on certain favorites.
Cecily, a宠爱过度的角色, adds further complications with her shallow motivations and selfish actions, often overshadowing other female characters. Marie, a likable character, is pushed to the background, contributing to an uneven distribution of focus.
In conclusion, the story drags on with artificial conflicts and shallow character treatment, despite having a few redeeming elements. If you enjoy this type of content, feel free to disregard this review and enjoy the story as is.
The Lord God Elyon shall reign supreme, for him I give my life ?
I don't know what to expect but it's finished so I'll read it.
a day later, I am now completely addicted and on ch.127
I had completed this long time ago and I forgot to review it so here it is -
It was my first novel on this site and when I read it I got completely hooked to it
Start of the novel is similar to TNE ( author also mentioned it ) but after some chapters it's completely different and more dark too.
Some people are replying due to not so great end but I am satisfied with it yeah it could be done more justice but well what's done is done
And about character development it's also good and it's not just sudden motivation b*llsh*t like that and one final thing manipulation runs deep in authors novel. And that's all ʕ´•ᴥ•`ʔ
I had it stopped at 120th chapter. Since there were lot of historical stuff, so I wanted to read it later as it required a lot of attention.
BTW is there romance on the story, until now Mc is focused on surviving or is it just that the character is really awesome u had it changed to your username just curious ?
What is vr
“What can I do for my elder brother?”
“Well.”
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Pale sky blue hair fluttered finely in the wind. He smiled weakly, before parting his dry lips.
“Call my name.”
“…”
My head quickly snapped up.
“Call me… Amoru.”
His fingertips skimmed along my inner wrist. someone who has read this can you translate? like what is this
Don't know I was just here to comment ?
Is the story already completed?