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this is a must read book
I like that it's well written
and I like the characters in it
nice work author
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you die, get reborn, want to just be some guy. Enjoy childhood again. Might as well.
A very nice book with a thrilling storyline and concept.
I honestly feel this is going to be a promising book and I hope all the readers would support me in this book.
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só pelo autor já sei que a novel é nota 10 ?
And turning back you will realize that you a ordinary person??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Wow. Another book of Author Mary. So, excited to read it. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The Story actually started off oretty good and kept me interested for most of the way through to the current chapter.(which at time if review is about 280 or ao chapters) But the story really starts to go downhill around chapter 200 as there forced events and character decisions that make no sense. New characters that are just annoying and dont make sense for who they are suppose to be. The MC who I had originally liked, i started to get annoyed with and started making choices that went against who he is. Its really dissapointing cause i had hope for this as there aren’t many decent Dungeon Lord type novels. There are other problems in this book, but for me the major turnoff where i just could not continue happened around the 200’s and i think specifically around 220.
Y'know I already have an inkling what's gonna happen here, even after just reading the first chapter. Not blood-related siblings have been the craze lately, so on the romance front, this sounds fun lolOther than that, I just had a slight problem with word repetition, especially names, but that's not a major problem.Pretty good, over-all.
honestly not good. so many mistakes of gender and word usage. the mc is incredibly boring with no personality and nothing is ever gone into detail in this book