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I don't read Sci-fi at all. As it's not my favourite genre or anything but let me tell you this is really very different then what I thought. The concept of virus and it's effect. the writing style and flow of the sentences are just amazing. it came really smoothly without any mistakes. I must say I recommend this to all whoever like Sci-fi this is a gems for them.
Skipping a lot of things, no background, not for beginners
The grammar is problematic.(have/has and past tense are just the ones i found) .
Kudos to the author , from the start this book captured my fancy and I can say for a fact that this is a book everyone should attempt to read . The grammar is on point , the style of writing is intriguing and just can't wait for more?
When I first read the synopsis I was happy, as it is rare to find a book where the MC is not either dicking around with diff girls or being hella overpowered. But well it disappointed me, the first 4 chapters of yours they are very boring. I do know that you might have wanted to explain the world's background but you could've taken a diff approach. All I am trying to say even though your story might be amazing or the idea behind is amazing, the way you put it in the words was a little Disappointing.
I have no complaints. This story so far is amazing. Everything from Joshua's character to the little elements of the story makes it so enticing to read. If I was forced to make a complaint, it would be that there aren't more chapters for me to read.10/10
After looking back at the novel I feel thrilled about this experience. The writing is top-notch, at least to my taste and I loved how the scenes were depicted, although I was shocked by some of them. I am looking forward to its further development. The main character does what he considers right and the "system" doesn't affect his own thinking or ensnaring him like a snake (at least for now). I couldn't take my eyes off it. Of course, I didn't expect a family-friendly story, but this was incredible.I found one or two words that were mistaken for something else, but all in all, it's awesome and also rich in vocabulary. Keep up with the story and absolutely don't drop this gem, author.
How tf mage become less favored class, trash look like a force plot very generic................. .............. ............... ..............
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okay another review I finally reached the current chapter and I got to say this is a diamond in the rough the mc is complicated the world is not as simple as it seems and if you want to relax and read something funny and relatable give it a try the character's in this book are really very entertaining and the way the mc sees things from his own perspective is eye opening
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I couldn't even complete three chapters The MC complains like an idiot Don't make a mistake, he really is an idiot.................................................
Finally found a good VILLAIN Novel where MC is smart and does things all wishes to see. Good World Background development. Better than most of those "villain face-slapping protagonists" plots. Has its own pace which is appreciated rather than rushing to take down children of destiny.
