This is really good, although the beginning of the story is somewhat hard to understand. After reading maybe 50 chapters you'll find it exciting to read. P.S. Not 'Greatest Heroine' its more like 'the greatest Mary Sue'
i like how the story develops, the characters are enjoyable, i personally like Zinhle, she is a well written side mc, she is relatable, i might say i didn't think her character will grow so much. keep up the good work.
kinda intresting looking forward to how he turns into a dark villian goodluck!!
Shameless Editor’s review!(No spoilers or plot discussion will appear. This is just my opinion on the overall story)I’ve been working on this novel for around 20 months, so a bit over 1 year and 8 months, and I must say that this novel has been a treat to edit. (Started working on this around Chapter 119)The story premise is very interesting, keeping a steady rhythm between detailed character development, plot progression, action, and steamy romance. The story is really enjoyable to the point where editing each chapter has never felt like work. It’s always managed to keep me engaged and anticipating what comes next, never once feeling boring or dragged out. The writing quality of this story is clear, concise, and has little to no errors. (It is my job to make sure that is the case, so it has my editor’s seal of approval!)The world development Author Victor Weismann has created is very in-depth, showcasing various supernatural factions which intertwine and interact to create a vivid world of fantasy hidden beyond the veil of a modern world. The use of real-life mythology and the way the different myths have been woven into the story both enrich the reading experience and work very well with each other to create interesting dynamics that is unique and engaging.Each character is well fleshed out depending on their significance to the plot, rarely, if ever, leaving readers unaware of a character’s traits, background, personality, or who they are as a ”person”. The use of pop culture and a healthy dose of anime/manga references create humorous interactions between characters and aid in defining many of the characters’ traits. (This story is Yandere heaven)With chapters being updated daily, with an average word count of 2000 words per chapter, this novel provides a decent amount of entertainment for everyday reading. And for those of you just starting, with a stockpile of 777 chapters as of writing this review, there’s an entire world for you to binge-read to your hearts content to consume a significant portion of your time to escape your boredom.So why not give it a read?
If it's his book, I'm gonna certainly read it because I love his style. This author is so superb and he's got talent. This book is gonna be great just like his other works. I'm looking forward to reading more chapters of the book.
War is a vicious cycle, but it will continue to exist as long as there are intelligent creatures, you just need to make as much use of it as possible
Interesting premice and worldbuilding but rather cliche charaxter and plot progression the author seems to sometime forget the levels of cultivation of the character from qi to core or core to nascent all around an enjoyable story when you want to pass time might rewiew again in the future
don't expect anything to accurate in America perception just think of it as a foreign country. that isn't the major problem though they added a cost with reward system in the form of choices but somehow completely making the person think completely differently is the cheapest choice. maybe I'll change my thoughts if there comes a time where the mc wants to be hated by someone and couldn't because it's too expensive but until then.
So far the book is really well. Read until chapter 35 and it is really good. The idea behind it is also very well thought off. Love how the male lead and female lead interact with each other. Hope the author updates regularly.
the story is great with minor grammatical mistakes,tho it will greatly promote your novel if u can add the tag,i will give more elaborate review after that.
why is webnovel just pummping out this trash I am a big fan of hidden dragon novels but this is just stupid 1 star ______________________________________
The author's writing has improved a lot from the past. Also the plot changed from the original novel, so even if you were a fan of that you should read this one.
This is a present for the author.