Personally speaking, I feel like this book has potential ;it being a rebate type system, however the fact that it's EXTREMELY fast past, and I do very much emphasize the extremely really throws readers off because it's pace is faster than the luxury cars being introduced after only what...2 days? that alot of things are not fleshed out and the characters aren't given much depth because of this. For example, he suddenly drives a luxury car despite being poor and depressed 24-48 hours before yet his brother has 0 reactions or thoughts, his father's girlfriend is like 'oh well, he probably won the lottery. He takes his brother shopping, packs the bags into the car after purchasing a luxury watch(which, by calculations should have been over his budget) , yet there's no mention of the brother after and he just goes to his new condo to sleep....where did the little boy disappear to during the shopping trip? There are actually a lot more plots holes that stems from the novel being too fast pace. Hopefully the author slows down, reviews and revise and insert some necessary filler chapters and patch the holes.
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a wonderful book which keeps u hooked from d very beginning. there r some similarities with extra's survival and author's pov but still it has it's own shinning points and hope author won't change that.. a good story with a protagonist who isn't bland or a naive kid but someone who knows what he's doing and has no moral bondings for his plans. keep up author, great job
Man I wish you would continue writing ur novel, it was one of the novels i looked forward to updating everyday. Dont let those losers keep u down man, have a good one
This story seems interesting for the first 12 chapter's I read.Mc learns kinda quick and the story moves a moderate paste.The premise of the story is interesting enough for me to keep reading
Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at
Amazing Novel you just need a few retouch. But it the end it is a great character development. It creates a world of its own. Keep up the good work. Another thing don't make the readers feel you are bored. :)
This novel has a ton of potential but sadly is held back by a ton of grammar issues that makes it look like it was translated by a machine. If the novel was rewritten with proper grammar and some of the sentences were revised to flow more easily then this would be a 5 star book. Another problem is that dialogue comes in the middle of paragraphs and is not separated when different people start talking making it hard to follow. The sex scenes are terrible and impossible to understand while having an unnecessary amount of cussing.
I'm sorry for the badly written review. Have you ever wanted to read about a shapeshifter slowly becoming god?No? Well, you should have. If you like yuri, action, romance, updates everyday, and quality writing, at least half those things are in here. Read it. It's good.
This is a very unique way to go about using powers and even his power is unique and cool
I'm only 28 chapters into the story, but so far, I'm hooked! Interesting plot, descriptive writing, and honestly if the author hadn't said anything, I would have thought that English was his first language. So far, this story is definitely 5 Stars and I hope the author starts writing chapters daily!!