Bro invincible means immortal/unstoppable/the strongest in something. Invisible means you can't see him. Please learn more English. And this joke is so lame already
Wait, what just happened???? It ended just like that?? meh, anyways it's a good time passer while waiting for the other updates of novels
tn's asking if there is something weird, bruh this entire plot is weird, this entire novel is weird
am i the only one who got second hand embarassment with the interstellar arc??
It needs more creativity and character development .
First at all, honestly it has some mistake of the sentence, but the author will correct it immediatly. This is the point I gave a high marks of this novel. No matter what else is good, as long as you focus on reader, it is the best. Next, the world background for now are still in earth, but I can guess that after it will began the new planet or new world. Sup you.[img=recommend]
Great start! The writing quality only increases per chapter, chapter 4 is the best chapter so far. Keep it up author, will follow this novel along its journey
I think that the prologue part is totally not needed right now. The way I see it, it can be very eye opening if the prologue part can be used further in the story.
otherwise, it's a good book. But I strongly insist that you improve on vocabulary expressions and make the scenes the characters more descriptive.
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A great story! Worth spending time to read.
Seriously the best detective online novel I’ve ever read.Don’t drop it and keep up the good work.
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