"Oh- So your the one i'll be staying with?? "
If they fail in their mission at most they would loose a chance .Many students try for higher gates if they have accumulated more than one chance to exercise their brain and get some real experience in innovation or leadership etc.
He growled.
"host system want you to get ready you will transfer to another world in 10 sec
Gender: Male
So it would be true for this as well, no?
"I knew they weren't moved," Nichiren said with a grin. "They tricked us!"
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hey everyone Author here it's my first time writing a novel as english is not my first language i try to write as good as possible please do suggest what can i do to improve the story and thank you y'all for reading
At first glance, it seems like an original novel, written by an English-speaking person. It has the same styles a lot of English sci-fi novels have and some more. But then, you see the character introductions and you're like, "Oh wait, this is a Chinese novels
Hey there, author here! So, I am going to rate my own story and leave this review for those who might get interested in giving it a try after reding through the synopsis. Also, please, if you are liking this novel leave your review and slowly move your fingers to that little "vote" button (press it!). HUEHUEHUE *evil laugh* - "Thank you! my dear reader!"Writing Quality – First of all, I would like to emphasize that English is not my first language and I have been studying it for five years. So, I might make a few mistakes here and there. However, I am always proofreading and using softwares to improve the writing. Story Development – I don’t think that the story development is going to deviate much from other novels. However, as a reader, I have always been losing myself when an author drifts too apart from a chronological line of events, so I am going to follow as much as possible an established order. I don’t want to write something confusing. Now, talking about the pace of the story, the start is going to be a bit chaotic, due to the situation that the MC finds himself in. However, the future chapters are going to slowly cement a flow. Character Design – I have always loved characters that are rational, self-centered, somewhat arrogant, and confident. Someone who is always planning and thinking how they can get the most of a situation, but still maintains certain values. This is the MC that I am trying to build. As for the other characters, I will be setting them according to the story’s progression. (I don't have but a few important character planned).Updating Stability – Around 2-3 chapters/week. I may exceed that amount if I have enough free time. World Background – It’s a world filled with different species, where all beings can become stronger through Mana. A world that is in the point of “rupture”. I know it’s a common setting, but I will be adding things up as the chapters are updates. However, I plan on doing a good job on that. (I hope)If you have read the synopsis and this review, and liked it, please consider giving this book a try."Also, don't forget to leave your vote and a review if you liked this work" - The author wrote, with hopeful eyes, waiting for your response. - "Thank you!"
Pretty good. Question: How powerful do you intend to make him?.................................................................................................................................................