She couldn't help but wonder to herself. These two are the most amazing clients I've ever had!
"Yuck," Scooby said as he held his nose.
"Calm, brother, calm. Death is but a natural part of the cycle of life."
He watches the scenes changed within this dream as the scenario went by so fast that he barely has any time to catch it. The ones that make the most impression on him, however, was still the girl called Megie. She was training? In her own magic and a teen named Kainen was teaching her himself. For a split second, Jin thought that he saw Megie looking over to where he was at but then her eyes just turned back to the teen Kainen and smile brightly at him. Damn, that nearly made his heart skip a beat.
"heh can you see me heh"
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From how unique the story is to how smooth it flows to how its written like someone who speaks actual english????10/10
Unnecessary descriptions You can have about 5 paragraphs talking about one character
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It was a fairly entertaining read, and I am looking forward to how the story will develop, though I am a sucker for military themed content.One suggestion I would like to see additional worldbuilding to provide greater context to the fictional nations to have, so readers can gain a greater grasp of how national affairs are impacting the characters. Of course a lore dump is not necessary, but additional sprinkles here and there can elevate the quality of your world.Never the less, I am looking forward to the next chapter!
Honestly was so badly cliched and written I couldnt make it past chapter 3. All these reviews seem suprr fake and I have no idea how thos novel has 4 stars.
bruuh. i was just a mere passerby trying a new book but this book got me hooked immediately. it is very refreshing to see a book with victorian-style setting among system and VR novels nowadays and i like this. for the writing style, 'luxurious' is the only term i can come up with, with how the author can make simple words sound extravagant. the explanation of power structure is easy to digest even for a noob reader like me. and the biggest plus of all is i like the author's sense of humor. kekekekeboth protagonists are OP and completed each other with how one is very cool and calm-headed, and the other is passionate and fiery. as the author said, two is better than one, indeed.action? check. mystery? check. sassy humor? check. a subtle hint of romance (cough)? check. everything i like are packed into this, so i'm excited for moree.this is a must read book. give this book a chance guys, and you'll see what i mean. keep up the good job author! ^^