If your going to MTL, you need to have good editors. Names change from paragraph to paragraph. Nothing is consistent. There's full blown untranslated paragraphs. An entire chapter is repeated with slightly different translation. It's a mess.The sorry itself is nothing to write home about either. Constantly retconning itself; "I gained a lot of experience, and in fact I had taken a 5x experience portion too, that I made with ingredients I bought and never mentioned any of that until after it had already happened."The MC supposedly has future knowledge, but it almost never comes up after the very beginning. The MC's sister is a big concern, then ignored completely. The MC is so OP so quickly there's never any tension. The stats system doesn't get much mention, even though stats are such a big deal, and supposedly the MC is gaining extra points during level up sometimes, those are mentioned once and then never again in the preview 40 chapters.It was already a mess, then it was poorly translated on top of that.
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The novel's okay. Has some cliches but at the same it's a breath of fresh air. And looks like in this one the transmigrator will take some time to wake up.. usually it happens in first chapter but here it only gets mentioned at chapter 19. 20 chapters are not quite enough to make up an opinion about this novel because it looks promising yet at the same time the author threw some cliches at us. MC's has different mentality than your usual MC that's for sure
I highly recommend it, it entered my top 10, both the character and the story are very engaging.this story has a lot of future!!!Looking forward to more chapters and see how the MC's revenge goes.
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Other than quite a few spelling mistakes throughout the story chapters, the plot and characters are good. Definitely one of the better stories I have read, I certainly got engrossed in it fairly quickly. It doesn’t feel too slow at the begining and the Mc acts how you would expect, especially from being in a new environment with things he’s never seen before. And the Author does a great job of making you hate a character with a passion one moment, and the next have you actually start liking them. Definitely reccomend giving this a read, though I do feel it depends on the person whether you fully enjoy or mildly enjoy this story. Regardless, it’s written well, needing only some minor editing. Give a few chapters a read yourself and decide from there, at least 10 chapters would be my recommendation. Simply because opinions differ throught the first few chapters in every story and 10 feels the most optimal for deciding whether something is a go-to or no go. Happy reading!
I liked it, it has a good plot and everything
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this story is ok. but thats it.the concept is nothing new but still rare enough to be interesting. the execution is meh.10 chapters prologue with some stuff thats relevant, 15 chapters of different pov's that feel like filler. that leaves me with 25 out of the 50 chapters i read with actual mc plot and its bland, the mc is not really memorible. the mc just goes into a dungeon and clears it without trying, he can tame 1000 beasts of c rank and below from the very begining, its boring there is no adventure and no excitement in this adventure story.im actually struggling with the rating for this story. 5 stars is an exceptional story, 4 stars a good story. 3 stars is an ok story, 2 stars not worth wasting your time on and 1 star is trash.this story is not good enough for 3 stars but better then 2 star.so my rating is 2.7 stars.
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now this interesting piece of novel,it's good and has a good writing quality ,the character design and the plot. Idk but some name in the novel is extremely familiar especially mc's hometown hehe
Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best! ??