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Update
I had to read the story from MTL sites to finish, but even those sites had the same issues this one did (though not as frequent as here).Apparently it has to do with the author’s attempt at fighting piracy, and I gotta say, it’s working cause the story is pretty much unreadable from 873 all the way until the end.So if you want to read the story here, I’m telling you now, don’t bother since the story is missing lots of text in nearly every chapter from then up to the very end of the book.The ending itself is so weird and rushed too that even if the novel was in prime condition, I wouldn’t say it’s worth reading.Save yourself the hassle and don’t even bother starting the series since nowhere online is there a complete free version.Do yourself a favor and just skip this novel entirely. Your peace of mind will thank you.
Yarg, this is real good.
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WuwuwuThe fact that the MC was the one who initiated to *papapa* rather than the ML was a big turn off for me. The thrill drop from the top of a building.
Please check the grammar, it is spoiling such a good story and making it boring to read. The first few chapters were ok then the translator started making too many grammatical errors
I want to read more of this story, it's interesting .
It's a novel to read only if you really can't find other novels to pass the time. This is the third time that my review has been deleted despite having given a 4 star rating, i will repost my review as many times as necessary because i don't like it when the author deletes reviews that he don't like and leaves what he wants.
It's a novel to be considered as a H*ntai or dirty novel, the novel is filled with 95% of Yuri relationships, so you don't need to get attached to any character, we have an MC who is reincarnated in a fantasy world with an ultra powerful mother, but there is nothing unique for this MC, even his talent, genius, training, technique, others have the same, even the system ( another reincarnated character have a system since the beginning of the novel and the MC does acquire the system around chapter 520 which is absolutely useless ) and even when the author has finally done something worthy of an MC and his talent since he skipped the Rank of cultivation from Half-Saint to Saint directly, we get a BS that the MC can no longer cultivate for 100 years because his body does not support the progression, so everyone catches up easily after 100 years and still loses something unique, if you really want to consider an MC for this novel it's his mother, she's a person who does what she wants when she wants and very powerful from the start being at Legendary rank ( A true God ), if she wants, she f**ks with her son or her daughter or both together, if her children are not there, she f**ks with her close friends (she no longer does so since she f**ked with her children) or with her maids, and in the last chapters around 684, she progresses towards a level never seen before ( Infinity Rank, to put it simply, at this rank you can do anything, you are omnipotent and omnipresent at this rank), which is impossible for the real MC of this novel to complete even if we give him billions of years or more, so you can simply consider her as the Female MC in the novel revolves around her ( I doubt she even loves him in a romantic way, but she loves him because he is her child and wants to pamper him, because he has absolutely no way of dominating his mother with his character and his strength if he was not her child ).
The only thing that can make you read this novel is S*ut and lemons, but even that is messed up with 95% of Yuri in all relationships, but there are always readers excited for scenes like that and that's it.
This is why i ask the new reader to consider it as a dirty novel or H*ntai if you want and to skip chapters in my opinion ( the MC has a Harem of wives, lovers and maids, with Yuri relationships served as milk to a child )
Of course, this is just my personal opinion, but you can read the novel or other reviews from other readers to get an idea.
To think pilot read books got picked, but it took 3-4 weeks for the book to actually publish. ..............................................
The author is a native English speaker based on his profile. So, my review of this webnovel is going to be more in line with that expectation and not the typical translation trash that litters this website. Writing Quality- There's a few grammar mistakes but nothing too serious. Story Development- For a while there the MC has some cultivation level dialogue going on and some typical thot in distress. But, the biggest issue this webnovel has is the set up itself. Presently the MC is playing a beta test version of the game and it's been 70+ chapters. Like a normal person would think, once the beta ends all the data is going to be wiped. So that means almost the entirety of the story written until then is going to be a waste unless some BS story development occurs to change common sense. Then we either have to deal with watching the MC rebuild his religion as some Nordic god again or deciding to be something else. Character Design- There's some cultivation type characters which is pretty low brow everything considered. Updating Stability- Consistent or maybe not? As a guy who's written 400+ chapters he spends an inordinate amount of time DCMA-ING bots that copy and paste his chapters onto other websites. Even threatens us the readers and not the bots he'll stop writing if the pirating doesn't stop. World Background- It's fine, but the author wastes too much time having the MC go on adventures and fighting in dungeons. The guy is a god, not some two bit adventurer. He should be out spreading his faith, doing miracles, or god forbid fathering kids in the mortal realm like a typical god. Just seriously, this beta test smorgasbord is do or die for this webnovel. If I was the author, I'd just wrap this up within ten chapters and than choose one of the typical demi-human races like the elves, dwarves, or the beastmen. Humans are overdone, especially since you've already chose them during the beta test, you've done orcs in your other webnovel, and the probably villainous race "primal whatever" just seems a bit lazy since you get to make up everything about a made up race.
Dropped at chapter 211 (TLDR: A cool waste of time until around chapter 100)I'm done. I put up with the "can" when author meant to write "can't." I put up with how one of the major 5 characters names suddenly changed at chapter 100. I put up with how the MCs mental buddy's name switched back and forth from Blood to the same as a different character's name. I didn't care how every friend he made was royalty or somehow a sleeping dragon he's known for years but didn't remember. What I do care about is how every fight could be half a chapter but instead is spoon fed to us over 15 where ever bad guy needs to say the same cliches non-stop.