Names change, unintelligent characters, nonsense reasoning, portrayed as western setting but characters have distinct asian mannerisms, bland over all, not worth the time.
I wish to slam my head into a wall after reading this amazingly perfect piece of trash, it has more holes than a sponge and more idiocy and hypocrisy as well as entitlement than anything else ive seen in all my nine lives
So far this story has been to the same standard as previous Doever works; super well written!Currently the story is only beginning so there's not much to critique fairly, but this truly does create a more "plausible" and as far as I am aware, unique, take on the Evolution LITRPG genre so far.Will edit/make a new review once the story has progressed further and their is more content to review!
You gotta be a special type of stupid to create a novel about "GHOSTS" but have him in a human form most of the time. The amount of failure that you have to pull just to screw up your whole novel by not even making use of the name... Like I get that you didn't want to write a good novel, but you didn't have to make it almost as terrible as those novels where the mc turns into something else but hates it so he instantly ruins it by getting a human form, Wait that's exactly what you've done here, you made a failure of a novel and now you use a human form because you had no idea how to write a novel about a ghost. Great job author, I try to be respectful to most authors but you just don't deserve it because you ruin your novel, make the readers wait through your terrible plot, and somehow find a way to ruin a topic that isn't really written about thus giving you so many different ways to write it. So for anyone wanting to read this, you might as well look for a different novel about a danny phantom at this point. I don't think many people here even read 1 chapter since this novel got the deserved 4.09 stars(Minus the 1 star I'm giving you) so for any of those poor fools thinking about reading this, don't.
idk if this is ur light novel or not since there is a manga out there but it is really good, im enjoying it to the fullest
This is a great novel. It has an awesome protagonist and and good side characters. Also, can anyone tell me if it's worth reading Villain cultivator? I'm aware that the the writing quality in the beginning is bad, but do I have to brace through it? Also, can anyone tell me the Fandom or wiki for Villain cultivator I can't seem to find it.
Love your story ??? synopsis and the first few chapters are so confusing and made me go deeper with your writings. Now I'm ready to read it till the end ?❤ surely u got me author??
Haven't actually read it, but I'm gonna give it 5 stars anyway******************************************************************************
One think that I always like to see, but rarely do, is a fun story told in first person perspective. And this is a fun story! Told in first person perspective. The MC is a likeabe person, it's very pleasant to spend time in his head. The RPG-inspired system and character stats are really effective at giving the story an appealing, quirky feel.Well done, author!
I have read this until chapter 160, and to be honest, i kinda dont want to continue further. See, this book author is quite a genius imo, he can drag 2-4 chapters just to explain something. Sometimes the xplanation can be important like xplaining the fey ecosystem and ability, sometimes unimportant like how writing mc's account book how much he spend and gain every penny, and sometimes can be totally useless.like copy-pasting the same fey abilities again and again with just 1 (ONE) skill addition. A good way to fulfill your release and word quotas i guess, good for him, but not really good for me, i mostly scroll all the way every xplanation chapters and totally not missing anything important. Filler chapter is still better than this kind of chapter, at least it's more entertaining.And because of this too, the plot become slow and sometimes stagnant, it's like 3/4 xplanation and 1/4 story. Crazy right? i know. And imo the plot is getting inconsistent over time. Like, at first mc does not want to attract attention cuz he's weak, he got no backing, all that nonsense. But he stronkly pushing his sister to the front row with "my sister is awsum so she must attract attention" logic. I kinda wish his sister got killed off screen and he regret his decision in the future to be honest because of his braindead action.Also mc made a promise to trading agreement with a web shop at the beginning, saying he's not an ungrateful person who pay other's kindness, but until chapter 160 that matter never comes to surface again. Well maybe becuz mc already rich guy now so he thinks it's alright to forget his promise, and thus he become the ungrateful bastard himself. His first retainer which he promised to heal also never appear again after he told him to find a big shop in the capital. Maybe he retired and decide to donate his insect queen to mc off screen lmao.That's my opininon, go read it if you like this kind of writing. I'm not here to judge you.
If you like house of horror and the Lord of Mystery there is no need to further read this review quickly go and read this novel you won't regret it. So far I've read the first 39 so this is my review of it, READ AND VOTE don't let this Hidden Gem go to waste.
I really like this story, it's definitely worth reading if you've read something like... What's a good example? Like a secret society type of thing, but with super powers? I like it, and the development and progress of the MC is pretty good. The main thing the author could brush up on is grammar and wordplay. Other than that, great job!