Updated!This isn't a review of me praising my work. This is a sort of disclaimer in case readers don't get suddenly disappointed.1. The MC - Don't try to understand him. Because he has many dynamics to him, it would mislead the readers into thinking that he is 'THAT type of character' when he isn't. His attitude on certain points would also be questioned. Sometimes, he would act out of character. It has been explicitly stated that the story is aware of it. In time, the questions would be answered.2. Plot too weird and random - As a beginner author, there are scene jumps in the beginning but it would disappear some chapters later. There would be some random events but they aren't closely related to the main plot.3. Atmosphere - 80% of the second volume is gloomy, not dark. Don't get the wrong impression from the beginning and the synopsis.4. Pacing - Events happen one after another. But I wouldn't call it fast as if the time is considered, it is slow. The MC doesn't get the time to breathe. This is my response to the well-deserved criticisms. If there are any questions, you can comment. I usually respond to the comments.
for some reason this book kinda hit it well with me. hmm... whatever, but i do know that I'll be following this story so long as it's still updating, though... DON'T STOP UPDATING THE CHAPTERS!!! DEV!!! I SUPPORT THSI BOOK!!!
This is a really good novel, don't waste your time here, just go read it, kudos to the author on a job well done and i wish you all the best in the future.
honestly incredibly tough to read. very stereotypical and constant use of the f bomb. the dialogue needs alot of work and the grammar isn't great either. I feel like it borrows from several other novels line vampire system and bloodline system and just does it poorly
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I have read 30 chapters and I like it until now. Some things are a bit strange, like learning a language in three days or reading an entire library in five days.good luck mr. author
An addictive book that has an MC that didn't belong to Earth. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
I expected humor, but I got a power fantasy instead. MC keeps getting cool stuff by being completely oblivious to everything, while everyone in the chat praises the air he breathes. Very disappointing IMO.
how will this story end it seems just like a dark adventure novel that has no progress so far its just I want to see fights and action not let's go kidnap yonome for our own profit
author here doing what all author do, read the book please.
Excellent book with great storytelling and interesting characters. A great read for anyone to get into, especially if you enjoy fantasy settings. The chapters are very well paced and it doesn't feel cumbersome to read at any point, as a matter of fact I can't put my phone down. Great work by the author, as was expected after his previous book was a hit as well.