just...what have i read? bruh i need to wash my eyes now. i am a reader and got goosbumbs from the amount of cringe here and i don't want to imaginethe feeling of writing it...overall a mess grammar and writing style with a disgusting mc and lot of emojis while mc crying aloud how he is sad because his wife slept with another bla bla bla...author you can start by reading other novels first see how things work try to understand or even copy their style if you can, stop using imoji on novel because it just disturb the pace and no one likes them. good luck for your next.
WTH ….. no chapters and WebNovel team high on their lame management select this tiltle for December campaign ..
While the translation team itself is doing great, the story itself has issues. Seems very jerky, no smooth transition from chapter to chapter there is always some sort of short time skip so that the author doesn't have to explain something.
While the character was raised on a dangerous planet, he had a father figure for a time and spent time with others in VR but he acts crazed and dangerous when he meets people in real life.
It is cool that everyone has a mech but it is never explained why those who aren't in the military nees them.
Finally no actual story line the character jumps from plot to plot without completing anything
Lovely writing author? keep it up. Looking forward to reading your other books.
love this book, the first chapter was the best!!
84 chapters 4-17-23
Hi author why I cant read starting from chapter 53 to the end
park is really pack
match is really March
the novel us worth reading
I love Amelia and Ethan..
good one author ...
I can imagine what Emma is going through. Damien is a demon, even though he is the male lead.