WillTheThrill
Engaging and unrushed though not without flaws the novel's strengths are enough to cover for its weaknesses.The pacing is unrushed and smooth this applies to character and world building as well as story.Character interactions and conversational quips need a little work to not sound so awkward and some gaps needs to be filled in to not sound like theres missing info and implications from the dialogue. All seem believable enough so far, but theres definitely room for improvement.Theres good effort put into developments outside of the main character's purview and the machinations beyond the personal level provides good world building and flavour.The author is patient and doesnt hand everything to the main character. This applies to powers, items, relationships, trust of side characters, etc though some interactions are a bit heavy handed.Definitely a novel with a solid foundation that makes me anticipate what comes next. I hope the author remains consistent.
Up to chapter 74 it has been great, but I'm incredibly frustrated that since then ch.74-90 are repeats.
how to make a dog like this song is a form
LECTOR IS SO COOL ( LIKE MAGE ASSASSIN)
interesting. I am fooling forward to new chapters.
the ntr just ruined it. I mean the was trash but u could pass ur time with it but ntr just ruined everything.
I'll be honest. The unique title and the prologue brought me here. The story is fast paced , engaging and I hope authyor stays consistent I recommend this to everyone
review for FP....the Poster seems interesting tho....nice choice !!
Thanks for the story, interesting to start out and see where it goes.
Dear readers, join me on this adorable journey where a Reverend sister-to-be finds herself married to a charming vampire! ? I promise you’ll love every twist and turn! Love, EZZTEE ✨❤️
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can't wait for more chapters............
