Anubismark
He’s too much of an asshole and immature compared to other martial arts mc’s. Martial arts is supposed to be about training your mind too but his character is no better than a cocky bully, besides he’s cheating on his wife and the content is all too repetitive. He either meets someone that isn’t his friend and kills him or he’s insulted by a stranger and kills him. Nothing civilized to read here.
in first i thought MC well take revenge or atleast his childhood friend will find out the truth but now author rush the ending with so many plot holes that can be improve if author took some time improve plot because so many stuffs are missing in it like what happen to the parents of MC, MC got little harem no romance scene to make mc and his harem to feel more connected, give one smut chapter of childhood friend and her BF just to add betrayal element in it which every story if it's not treated properly then it can lack luster only betrayal element keeping this story together even those gods , angels or demon element didn't remove that main driving point like betrayal , huge disappointing thing is no MC/his girls smut, no satisfying revenge author said not to focus on revenge (b*tch you story roaming around from the start ) huge disappointing , childhood friend didn't find out truth to make her regret, reason behind why everyone hate MC or remove that effect ,and rush ending ( huge waste of time , waiting a lot for new chapters to read for revenge and novel ends it was a hug disappointment) and may little bit too much ntr element that didn't make any sense.?
although there are issues with grammer etc, i love this novel . keep going !!!,!,!,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..!.!!!!,!!,!,!???..!!!!,,,,,,,,,,,,,!,!!,==¢÷`^`×|×^~|¶¶`Π^~÷`×~Π÷€|°`×€√~`=|^÷|÷|×`°~^``¶∆`°|Π|Π`°€×€°°÷`×`×°©™®×¢`℅`]
Kinda defeats the point of getting sent back to the past. Personality remains as the younger self = Character development remains the same.You can’t ‘fix’ wrongs if you’re too immature to even accept that there is something wrong. I also don’t like the excuse for the inclusion of the MC’s Golden Finger
it's okay too fast paced and author hasn't explained much
This is not a martial arts novel this is a slice of life romance novel about a guy who's trying to woo a girl and uses martial arts to do it.
the mating ceremony is right out of a bad porn cult thing. had to stop reading. do not recommend at all
The storyline was great, but the grammar was atrocious! I could barely finish the book due to the horrible grammar. It was painful trying to figure out what the author had tried to write. I awesome the author did not learn English as their primary language, because if they did it was not reflected.
good alur ceritanya
Loved this story! Thanks for creating a beautiful cast of characters and their world. Thank you for the moving and beautiful ending!
..i didnt read them yet.I cant comment
I am ready to read the whole book now!
