The novel has an almost professional feel, even though it is not my type of novel, I will definitely check it out for future updates, the characters have a motivation and more importantly, they feel real. The mc might come off as a bit of douche in the initial chapters but that's ok, and world building is very good. and I feel like there is a conspiracy behind the pushing of this game to the mainstream schools if you like gaming novels then this is a must for you to check it out.
From what I see the stability of the updates is nice - not that I look at that normally, as I know myself that sometimes it's difficult to write and post all the time ^^ I like the language used here - not too fancy, but not too basic. Perfect in-between so that even people who aren't native to English may enjoy the story without getting confused.As for characters - what I loved most was when I spotted a Polish name (makes me wonder if you too Dear Author, like me, are Polish ;) ). It's still pretty early but I think both the characters and the world are evolving nicely.I have one recommendation - the dialogue options would be more visible and it would be easier to read if you'd use B or I with them - it is a bit tiring on the eyes without it <3I hope Dear Author you'll see this as an encouragement to keep writing. One day you'll get more words like this, so keep it up - sharing your imagination with the world is a beautiful thing, so don't stop :)
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this book is very interesting. Story is nice and female lead is awesome .
I hate it when people mess up English because it's so annoying, but the author steadily keeps improving, and the story is absolutely amazing. Keep up the good work!
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Such a captivating start to the story. Definitely an interesting read, the writing quality is marvellous. It contains the perfect balance of dialogue and narration. I believe a lot of people would really enjoy it. I hope it get more notice! Good work author, keep it up!
Writing a review because I need all the cultivation resources I can get in preparation for my upcoming breakthrough. I'll be beginning the process of condensing the Qi in my dantian so wish me luck fellow daoists.
loving the story so far! mc gets pushed around a lot as far as I have read but it seems necessary to develop the story? It's not too annoying yet so I guess that much is alright. Keep it up!
A beautiful first attempt. Good work author. There’s so much to look forward to here. Interesting plot and interesting characters to read about. A fantasy world to keep up with. From Review swap.
Funny story, keep it up, and be more creative.You are good, please be yourself. Do not try to copying others. Its good to be inspired by other.Oh, and do not make the readers pleased. Its your story, your world. Yours. Not other people.Keep it up, i'm rooting for you.Fan +1