RobertC7044
What a twist ending. I loved reading this. Thanks.
Ch:131... Tf! I didn't know that Fire can be frozen.
do give it a try......do give it a try......do give it a try......do give it a try......do give it a try......
The story has great potential and the creativity is admirable. Keep it up author.
You already know that if it Is written by the one and only awespec so it is definitely going to be good. Rn there are 12 chapters and in all honesty it is to early to judge for me and I am just tryna be the first one to write a review. I should probably wait for a lot more chapters to come out but I am already behind on to many books.
what an interesting take on levelling up. It's like a game that is a novel at the same time. If that is not intriguing, I don't know what is. I love the story! A perfect 5 stars!
OK this is an actual review. I started this novel because like you I thought since it said 5 stars and there a bunch of 5 stars ratings but that is NOT the case. I got to chapter 165 and this is toxic dumpster fire garbage. Why go so far as 165 you say? Well naively I tried to stick it out but it was just so bad. Characters are about as cliche and flat as you can imagine. MC especially. There's no struggle, no real development because everything is handed to him on a silver platter. Even supposed impossible trials are magically achieved because he "happened" to somehow exploit some loophole. And if the Main Character is bad, the supporting characters are worse. They are just there to make the MC look good and power of friendship. No real value. There also just no clear plot line. So much gets introduced and put aside. Like for the Main character is trying to climb a tower dungeon while also being a first year at a school while also being apart of some secret organization then out of nowhere he's attacked from different world from outer space?!? (yes this actually happened). Just makes no sense.The writing quality is also clearly subpar. So many grammer and spelling mistakes it's comical. While I don't mean to be rude but this is no doubt machine translated at best with no revision effort afterward. Updates was a positive. Very Consistent. But thats it. Background is promising but not fleshed out very well or at all really. Many countries and places but no attempt to talk about them or make then anything more then stating "this town in this country". Any way long story short, this is so trash, it's not even good enough to be guilty pleasure trash. Have some standards.
It's so pointless to read. It's more of a diary of mc with a lot plot armor.0 world building, 0 character design, you can feel that author is just wish fulfilling. And if you read 15 chapters you will feel haw pointless it is to even read it.
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
NEED MORE OF THIS KIND OF VILLAIN NOVELS ,THIS NOT THOSE NOVELS IN WHICH MC JUST KILLS PROTAG AND ALWAYS SIMPS FOR heroies . MC IS TRULY EVIL AND WORTHY OF CALLING A VILLAIN
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Author here, are you looking to read a system novel with an MC who isn't just crying all the time? Writing novels is not a hobby its a lifestyle--prose? character development? worldbuilding? Seen it all. Are you looking for something special, something refreshing? Like a nice cup of ice-cold lemonade? I've got a it all.It'll be something unlike anything you'll ever read.
