Author-san please include some romance(No Ntr please) in the future.. .. I feel it should have been something he missed in his previous life!
Very very well written. Love the zombies descriptions. The vocabulary and grammar are spot on. The plot is epic but most of all, the character growth is really well done! Excellent novel!
Okay, I'm all caught up (So far Till Chapter 19), and I have to say, it's been an interesting read.The author's use of narration is unique and the characters are interesting. The beginning also gets you hooked.The line between good and evil is blurred, and I somehow find myself wondering what will happen next.This isn't five stars since the author doesn't upload on a daily basis. I hope that changes.Still, though, good job!
Great description, edgy plot and overall good writing.One of the best I've read here even though it's just 3 chapters inI hope the writer keeps up with the good work and also keep up with the update... it is highly needed because of the we that lack patience;)And to those who are thinking, sould I read... READ! IT'S AN ORDER!
The stakes in these chapters keep escalating and I am physically unable to breathe. Let's talk about the milk scene. Xin Ling walks into Tang Yue's room with vitamin-infused milk, completely unaware that: 1. Tang Yue is actively trying to poison HER 2. A demon is watching from the shadows 3. Ouyang Shaojing is about to come home and blame her for everything Tang Yue's internal monologue is chilling: 'If there is no poison in it, then she would add some herself.' She's willing to frame Xin Ling for murder. And Cen Yinian's intervention—choking her with demonic energy but NOT killing her—creates this incredible tension. He's protecting Xin Ling while also making it look like Xin Ling attacked Tang Yue. The dramatic irony is suffocating. Then Ouyang Shaojing's reaction: 'If it wasn't you, then what's this white powder in the milk residue?' He's not just suspicious—he's convinced. And Tang Yue's performance as the victim—'Sister, what did I ever do for you to hate me so much, to want me dead at all costs?'—is so good it's terrifying. Xin Ling is trapped. She can't explain the vitamins without revealing her mission. She can't mention the demon without sounding insane. And Ouyang Shaojing's glare could literally kill her. The stakes have never been higher and I need to know what happens next
I'm a ****** minded person. As long as think I can read this novel without much difficulty and the story met my type of humor, I will rate it highly.
Apologize for giving bad review.. i juz dont like the part with harem...the MC that u build come from nble fmly i didnt expect u to develop him into *** maniac.. (my impression after reading a few chptrs) other than that its good....(already finish reading all chptrs u wrote).... my first thought after seeing the MC bcming *** maniac : "the author must love reading manga" ... well i know this is ur harwork but still to see a man easily seduce by ***, it juz dnt live up to his status as a nble man... ? ...lastly the reason y i read this nvel bcz i see it related to food... thnx for ur hrdwork n i think i will juz drop this nvel...gud luck in ur writing!
Great story??read it at royalroad . Pls try to post more chapter and more quickly?? Had been following this story from start(i.e. from release of ch 1)
Its an alright novel. Its just in between good and bad, average. This is like the novel ‘passive cultivation of techniques : cultivating to become a buddha in a demonic sect’ that was a trial read a while back
Okay, first things first, I'm no author nor am I an expert but as a reader, the grammatical errors and poor sentence structure leads to me being unable to picture the scene.Even just a quick run through from a fluent English speaker would significantly help, but I feel that without those errors this story will be an interesting read.Also, I am not sure what the terminology used for this us, but stating who is the current speaker, current POV and seperating different characters' speech.For example, instead of a paragraph looking like:"And that's the plan right" "yeah, perfect"it'd probably be much easier to understand like:John anxiously questioned Bill for the nth time, "And that's the plan right?""Yeah yeah," Bill reassured, "it's perfect."And also at the beginning of each perspective change label who is talking:-----John POV-----
Really awesome Description and I hope same goes for the novel ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Started good but it is getting worse, this novel must be about going into various dreams and doing things in them but its focus is about being on normal op stupid mc in a modern world