"Strocker, for gods sake stop this." Silk shouted, "Can't you see you are being used."
he had to look after himself when he was a baby he was last at a orphanage where he had to work and do chores to fill his stomach but that to barely and when he was five he was kicked out because he was to weak and couldn't do any job available at the time, he scavenged for food in the trash and leftovers and survived for 10 years.
"Young master, please forgive my disciple for his ignorance. Let us deal this with our own sect's rules." Suddenly Patriarch Blue standing in between them, saving Lu Yan's life at the critical time.
Ah, so it was because people complained.
I like how the story progresses, keep writing Author this is a masterpiece, and highly recommended can't wait to read the next update ?❤️u200d?❤️u200d?❤️u200d?❤️u200d?❤️u200d?❤️u200d?❤️u200d?❤️u200d?❤️u200d?
1. i read the first chapter..its not that the translation is bad, the translation good the grammar is good too, but with the too detail explanations -which i think is not necessary-, it makes this novel too boring too read.. i cant say the story is bad because with just the way novel written, it makes me hasitate to read more... mmm or should i say it really bores me -no offense here- just my opinion though... 2. the way the character introduced in the novel is way too unique, some people maybe found it not uncomfortable... though i read the first chapter but i cant understand anything, i understand the words, its just i cant understand what the author want to tell 3. will have to reread the chapters, this is for now, maybe will change my opinion after i read further.. 4. good luck translators... and editors
I like how the story is developing but I came here for system and haven’t seen any sight of it even tho I’m still enjoying it tho
Hi Author. This Business Empire themed novel of yours is very much interesting and likable. This Novel is one of the best novel I've read in the recent days. At the end, I saw there is no further chapters updated.Author this novel has potential in it.Please don't stop writing it.Please update us with further chapters in this novel...
This is a good start but I really want you to stop delaying the next chapter. I love stories that have the main character use knowledge of the future to make his life better than before. The poor to rich story line is also good as long as the main character doesn't get too rich too fast. Fast increase in strength is okay as long as the character doesn't forget to take time to learn control. It would also be okay for the MC to kill rapist, murderers, slavers, and rich assholes who take pleasure in destroying the lives of innocents in brutal and painful ways. Those that molest and brutalize children don't deserve the comfort of death. The MC should make sure to give them fates worse than death that will make readers laugh or feel satisfied.
Muy buena historia me encanta aunque si se tardo en actualizar vino con calidad espero que te valla muy bien en la vida y que puedas seguir escribiendo asi de bien (spanish)
The quality of this book surpasses so many other books that I have read. The character development of Lucien really shows, although there are not many chapters in the book it is simply amazing. So many details about his lovers.
I love this novel. He tied me up. You just have to keep your expectations low.