Sometimes I feel physically tired of the translation work and sometimes I'm encouraged by the passionate readers like you guys. But all in all, I feel good to be with you, my readers.
At first I did not dare to read this novel because of the strange description. But I saw a high rating and started reading this novel. I have never regretted doing this. This is a great story with elements of R18. Many stories lack such scenes, but the author corrected this monstrous mistake. I think everyone will be pleased after reading this story.P.S. I do not recommend reading this story in the presence of other people and in tight clothes.
anyone else too scared to read this - like god forbid the writing is good and I empathize with the MC. If you take the plunge lmk if the pain was worth it
this novel is good i actually read this on other site yesterday and its on ? hope to see more character improvement and improve the world background a little that's all thanks.
all I can say is that, author-san if you are reading this, work like a zombie and upload 20 chapters, no... 50 or more chapters a day. I don't care how you do it. Just, kidding! that's my way of saying of how great your novel is!?
I was gonna read this, but then I read the title and I just want to make this incredibly clear
I made mistake in last review, there is no ntr in story, it's safe space.
got to say the intro chapters are painful and aren't good at all in my opinion. read to chapter 17 which is where i dropped it. the mc doesnt come off as smart which the story wants you to belive he is which is only supported by random info dumps the mc provides. but at the same time he knows nothing at all about the world he lives in which i would expect a normal 13 year old to know let alone someone who has been reincarnated and is suposedly super smart now since they had a second hyper learning period. top that off with basic logic/world building mistakes like thinking muscle memory carries over between reincarnations and deciding to make healing potions some scented candle because the author thinks it would apply faster then drinking (and comparing the effectiveness to nano bots which is a disgrace to nano bots and technology) it and leaves less impurities that way. not like cigarettes and vape build up residue in the lungs so why wouldn't this potion do the same. (we all know it is just to be different and not follow tropes but it is justified so poorly)first time i have been put off by a story so much before the paid chapters start. no idea how this only has like 4 reviews that arent 4-5 stars especially with people complaining in paragraph comments.
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Scar is actually doing a good job with the juggling, I'm so impressed! But at some point something's gotta fall :( super excited to see who this blue eyed guy is! Loved the last two chapters!
The dialogue in this novel is absolutely stellar. Let me just start with Fu Xiao's voice because it's instantly recognizable: "This is called... a family visit!" / "Hitting is affection, scolding is love, and chasing me down with lightning is just another deep expression of romance!" / "This is normal financial mutual aid between loved ones! It's the warm transmission of cross-realm family affection!" This man has a vocabulary for everything except honesty. His dialogue is a masterclass in comedic deflection — he wraps every shameful act in increasingly elaborate euphemisms. And the fact that he's illiterate? The letter to his wife is described as having "crooked scrawl" and the handwriting looks like "dancing earthworms"? Perfect. Every detail reinforces the character. Fu Yan's voice is completely different — dry, sarcastic, brutally honest. "Just say straight out that we can't afford to keep little sister and want to send her to Mom's place to leech off her. Why bother with all this buildup?" He's the straight man to his father's chaos, and his one-liners land every time. But the real surprise is Fu Pin's narrative voice. She's three years old but her internal monologue is sharp, observant, and full of deadpan humor. "I suspected this letter was dictated by my dad and transcribed by my brother, because I knew my dad's handwriting looked like dancing earthworms." She's processing all of this adult nonsense through a child's eyes and the result is comedy gold. The ferryman's dialogue is also worth noting — his voice shifts from menacing to surprisingly gentle, which tells us everything we need to know about him in just a few lines.
what did Gavin ever do to deserve this