Update plz
Idk, it all went downhill when the translation style changed. Though, it felt like several plots were bunch out together, it would've been a good read if it was translated properly.
Hohohoho good tear her mask author
I agree with Blyth, make up your mind already-- second thought, can totally hear that them in my head, just like Star Wars and Jurassic Park. Coincidentally I think all were created by John Williams.
I have read this novel over 180+ chapter and i have to say this is literally copy of Cultivation Online not only in cultivation wise , Story wise too author just changes little bit of story nothing else.Very slow pase of story.And too much sweet talk at start it was good but it's going more annoying.Literally after bit of fight goes kiss and asking is he ok, even if he didn't even get a scratch, and they stuf food and same dialogue follow every time that how much they eat and all. And then more sweet talk
It's an amazing story and I have been following for a long time. But recently it's been getting reaaaaallly slow paced. I think I will really have to go now and come back later to binge read . ? ?
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A decent novel ruined by what I assume is translation issues. It hurts me in a different way that MTL. I’m just bloody confused. Author forgets level ups, doesn’t explain anything about the world leading to absolute confusion, I don’t even KNOW what his pets do! The so called ‘tomb dreams’ are complete filter with 0 explanation. They shouldn’t even be written, they are just word filter that make it even more confusing. I don’t know if some of the issues are translator or author, but it’s still a cluster fk none the less. Peak confusion was the chapter (spoiler alert) with the ape. Why tf and who tf thinks it’s alright to come kill someone over getting first place in school? Completely a force fed conflict that came out of nowhere. Novel just makes no sense and my head hurts.
Author-san, I suggest that this one piece novel be moved to fanfic mode because your novel is now in Novel mode, so readers rarely see or read, the average reader looks for one piece novels in fanfic mode. just a suggestion.
Has anyone found the raws yet? I'd literally be willing to pay if anyone actually finds themcharactersssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Okay, people!!! after writing a quite long prologue, we finally come into the main story where we will flesh out the leveling progress of the MC for this story which is Ragna Orion Miraikuru Kent.I'm sorry if you all thought that Ragna Orion Mamoru Kent or Ragna 12 will be the MC before since he was the first character that has been introduced but sadly his role in this Novel is to become a Mentor to his Current Timeline Self, Ragna Orion Miraikuru Kent.Thanks for reading, and I'm very sorry for the confusion you might think about the story.
First off I must say that the concept of the story hooked me in since I'm interested in viking culture and there isn't another novel that follows this concept that I know of. So I went into this hoping for a great novel, however the early execution of the story and character development was sub par at best which ended with me dropping the novel. My main gripes being that the author doesn't expand on why the MC has the following points or his reaction to his sudden reincarnation in the beginning of the story:1) Knowledge of Latin at a proficient level(Latin being dead language) of which I'm certain that a 'supposed' military member of the Mexican army would not know.2) Expert knowledge on medical practises and research (he mentions that he will 'explain' many diseases and their 'processes' to a random woman proclaiming herself to be a 'doctor'3) His reaction to his daughter's death after being reincarnated was unrealistic to say the least. How he just shrugs off her death and soldiers on to having a full on dialogue in latin with a random woman is just baffling to me and removes a sense of realism that ought to be there.4) Author doesn't show much of why the MC has any of the knowledge I stated above. He is only shown to have ties with the mexican army, we don't know his profession or why he was travelling to Athens with his daughter in the first place.Overall just a disappointing opening to the story and the MC in general. Many points are left unexplained and the reader is just meant to go with the flow. The MC has a weird motivation to want to continue living to and old age and conquer territory since it relates to him blaming God and religion for the deaths of his wife and daughter. The author never wrote about the MC being religious before he died as that would make more sense behind this motivation. The grammer is around average for this site but has much to be desired, an editor or spell checking would work wonders for the story. Hopefully the author can take this criticism and work on it towards future chapters and books.