Yeah you know what I'm just gonna say this, I suck at this. But I want to share the story in my head so I am writing this story. Oh right please leave a review and vote ;) wink (Shameless)
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Hey Webnovelist!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email [email protected] We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
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I put a lot of effort into this, please help cheer me up guys and in turn, I won't let you down..please and thank you all.
The writing is good, the updates are consistent, the story development seems solid, the characters are original, and the background seems to be well thought out. Still, I'd enjoy seeing a bit more focus on the description of the setting and what the characters look like. To the author: Feel free to check out my original Avatar The Last Airbender spinoff "Avatar: Macai's Journey" if you would like.
When most apocalypse stories wrote about the Hero, this one wrote about the dungeon boss, the villainess that kills humans. However, with the MC (demon) betrayed by another Demon, this creates an interesting complex character that made me wonder where the story would lead. Smart unpredictable MC and great world-building, this story definitely worth reading.
Really enjoyed it as of ch 50. One thing that is a bit anoying is how slowpaced the story is but the uppside that the story gets dept
This is very good keep it up!
Novel is very good. Only thing that slightly (very slightly) annoys me is the name of cultivation/techniques grade name.Technique grades: The grades of a Technique: Preliminary, Refined, Lateral, Authentic, Mystical, Unrivaled, Primate, and Antecedent.If anyone finds the cultivation grade list, please comment.
Like the novel. What I like is MC isn't either a stupid or a forgiving guy. He is strong, he schemes and also has a strong background. The only thing that it lacks as of now is a strong villain to give him problems.But, only 36 chapters have passed. So, we'll have to see... A Villain who might be the final boss is already introduced in the early chapters, who is a standard guy with poor background, sick grandma, a beautiful sister, and gf with heaven-defying luck and equipment. We'll have to see when they get to meet.It's more like a rise of a Good Villain to take revenge against a hero. I can see it has a high potential, at least on the story-wise.