I love the story and the way you write it. Writing quality, updating stability, story development, character design, and world background are so good. Success for you ❤
Not able to understand the story flow and and the time skips make this a horrible read.Ex :- Chapter 3-5 the whole time line is messed up.Bye
The story is a mishmash of all the good things a normal Xianxia reader likes. Some of the tropes like face slapping, power imbalance and way too overpowered Mc with looks that could kill anyone and nigh-omnipotence. The story is character centred and simple plots that have easy resolutions. The story is suitable for consumption as a daily dose, but not binge reading. I do not want to comment on the negatives but encourage people just giving it a chance and then decide if it's you're cup of tea.
I read the first two chapters of your novel and I liked the plot line. It's very interesting. Also, the dialogue flow between the characters is amazing! But it would be a clean and a clear read if you give some information about the situation and the setting but apart from that, its a worthy read! Keep up the good work!
There is little to no explanation or exploration of World background or even MC's clan or techniques it's not that it's mystery his dad & butler knows it but never told MC.MC is thinks little to nothing logical isn't very attentive to surrounding or happenings main thing for assasin,his character didn't grow much his wife has more development than him, she went from mortal to being more powerful than MC. MC gets thrown to random places comes back boom his wife is more Powerful than before. Even his daughter has more progress than MC in month too.
you are bored from the typical cliche scenarios. then this novel is for you, completely madness.mc has a daring personality that doesn't fear death itself even with his weak power.
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I like this book.but don't know if it will be picked.probably not,........................................................................
idk why ppl be complaining its pretty goodall of guys just suck go back reading shounen novels that the author work hard to update new chaps support him if u dont want to read then dont read it and dont complain
I don't know what to feel, I thought it was some random trash novel but once I read it... P A I N X H I M I K O WHY DOES IT WORK SO WELL? Good writing, very interesting story development. Please continue the hard work (release new chapter pls..)-Deathho