This novel showed some premise but its utterly filled with cliches and no worldbuilding or any real plot at all. Just trash. The only decent thing is the rate that he updates this novel.
The first 10-11 chapters are terrible but everything after that is great. It’s to the point where it feels like a whole different person wrote it. My suggestion for readers is to skim the first 10 chapters, my suggestion to the author is to fix those chapters because I almost dropped it it was that bad.
its awesome,everthing great awesome book. the charictors are great to use the speacial powers and clear dnegans. I wish there was visual the way the writer describes the female charictor and the mail are great.
the worst fucking novel, i ever saw the strongest char joining a bunch of guys just because he needs some fucking idiots as friends so that he can help them level up. by wasting his own time . the mother ****er is doing it because he needs a girl to lick her ass.
Keep writing please! As a premiere SSS Potatomon, I require tons of chapters as evolution material, and this is quality work. Loved it! Now I just need to finish writing 140 characters.
Thanks for the chapter ???? I am really eager for the advancement of the white lotus ???? and hope more chapters will be available
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Read few couples of chapters and yes I see how potentially well to do this novel is!The novel starts great, the progressing events surrounding the mc who is on his path to regain back his fame and honor is very concisely written. The use of several incidents is portrayed balancing the plot hand in hand. The book has a great many tags to keep in mind which is wonderfully put together. *you need to keep a lookout for typos. Good job author!
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This novel is one of the most amazing things I have picked up in recent yearsI can can boldly say that it will become an example novel for other people to write novels on modern and system category novels One of the must read I wish the writer all the best and I hope he will be as energetic as he is now ???
Nice Book Name, Nice Book Cover.Great plot, nice character. Everything about the book is good except for one thing. Your grammar! the poor grammar usage will make your book lose its potential. If you find it hard, use Grammarly. It'll help you a lot, another piece of advice, read books, don't just focus on writing, read more so you will have to compare their writing skills to yours, that way you'll know where you are lacking behind and then correct yourself.Good luck with your writing.