Fast sex with the lead male
It is a great story with great potential !keep at it, author!
Finally there is a good ROTTK based novel on WN!!!There is a shortage of Romance of the Three Kingdoms novels on WN, and even in the internet unless you are a MTL masochist you wont be able find many of them. So it great to have a new ROTTK novel on WN, now to talk about novel in more details. Writing Quality - 5/5 - English is my second language, but I don’t remember spelling or grammar mistakes. In addition everything is clear and is easy to read. Updating Stability - 5/5 - So far we are getting daily updates and sometimes there is 2 chapters a day so everything is great. P.S. If you were you need to make a break, please leave some kind of notice, it’s very frustrating when author leave for some time without notice.Story Development - 5/5 - We got a fan of ROTTK reincarnated in this exact times and gets a system as bonus. At first we were able to see how MC started to grow his power and preparing for the future. It’s worth mentioning that system doesn’t make him OP, honestly apart from him using it for a map and getting some rewards I don’t even remember about its existence which is certainly a big plus for me. Also real characters act in accordance with their character in ROTTK. Overall so far we got an exiting story where you always wait for a new chapter. Character Design - 5/5 - Lets start from a real characters, they are acting in accordance with their ROTTK counterparts which is great. When it comes to original characters they are fine; nothing bad you can say about them. The most important, our MC is also good, first of all he doesn’t scared of changing the future and just life’s his life, so far everything was great but there is only 48 chapters, so there is no time to see the character development. World Background - 5/5 - Romance of the Three Kingdoms is a great piece of literature and novels based on it certainly doesn’t have problems with a world background. Overall this novel became one of my favorite ones and I’m exited to wait for new chapter and see the future story of our MC.
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an interesting Fl book without an annoying ml love candidate that wants to steal the show. at least until chap 100. the fl has a good background story and is learning fast how to fight and well the only thing that doesn't make really sense is that she can't already fight with her experience in games or it has a reason that I overlooked like that vr wasn't good enough back then or something like that...well it is one of the best Fl stories that I read until now that isn't romance and feelings focused.I really hope it doesn't get dropped or loses its focus on gaming and the meta story to a "everything is bad when I'm not with my ML ???" book.
The concept of this book itself is very unique. It is intriguing, at the same time addictive. I love the pace and flow of the plot. A perfect binge reading material. Great work!!!!
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Progress: Chapter 41 (the one named "Chapter Forty" by the author).This should be more "No one under 17 admitted" and less "General Audiences".This review may contain light spoilers for the very early (mostly first) chapter.It's pretty much what I'm looking for in a story with an evil protag. Ruthless MC who still has some people he cares about and still has setbacks. Also one who knows when to back off.Writing Quality:Pretty Good. Half a star off for the occasional typo as well as grammar (such as full stops instead of question marks or a quote beginning with an apostrophe and ending with a double quote), but they are all pretty rare.Another half-point of for the Chapter Names, which are simply numbered (and off by one). I find those quite important. In my search for answers regarding my next point, I found out that the hated scrapers have chapter titles for the first 15 chaps, and those do match what I came up with in spirit. I don't know if this story once had Chapter Names or if the Pirates came up with them, either way they are better than what we have now.Stability of UpdatesIt's black magic to me. Most reviews I see are from two years ago where according to the ToC nothing was released. Chapter 6 (the one named "Chapter Five" by the author) was released before Chapter 1 ("Prologue"). There are also pretty large gaps inbetween chapters. I can only assume that maybe there was some heavy editing involved. I'ma give three stars for the recent chapters, but have honestly no idea what to make of the dates from the ToC in terms of stability.But I will positively point out that these are long chapters.Story DevelopmentAs the Sypnosis didn't make it clear for me: In the Prologue the MC goes from Broken to Slightly Overpowered, with hopes of becomming Completely Utterly Broken once he mastered Cultivation. As much as I usually dislike cultivation, this one pulls it of very nicely which I'd personally attribute to World Background. The Story progresses just fine (but without much time passing). Full marks from me.Character DesignAs there hasn't been much time which has actually passed in-story, we don't have that big an idea on the development. But the MC (if you forgot already: Evil, Ruthless, knows when to back off) does seem to adapt to his current situation(s). And the five years we time-skipped do seem to have made an impact (as we know he values his family). I'm letting you know that I'm not that picky here (especially when it comes to side characters, but they do seem to have personality for what I am concerned about), but I'll give it full marks.World BackgroundWe mostly only know what the MC knows when he encounters it in the world. I think this is isn't a bad thing, but I wish we knew slightly more. How many people have which cultivation rank? How many people are able to join that… institution he joins in what I think of as the second⁺ arc? As the MC doesn't seem concerned about these things (for he is one of the few people), we will also never know. We also don't know much political knowledge except for what can be found between the lines. I'll give four as what we have is sufficient for me to enjoy the work.Overall, I'd recommend it if you are into an Evil Protagonist Novel which is more then the simple "Revenge" plotline.
Synopsis is Interesting ✓Overall Plot is so intriguing ✓Fighting scenes are improving ✓Letting the story more engaging✓Read this so you won't regret it (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
Really good besides the writing quality which is quite poor............................................,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,..,.,.,..,.,
at the start of the story it says that the life of the mc is tied to the life of the godesses but nobody cares about his life or death this doesnt make sense to me.like there should be people willing to keep him alive so these godesses stay alive
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