The book feels very fast paced however this also feels kind of correct because it feels like how a person would remember things if it happened to them like they remember the really important things and that's what matters because it's what's interesting And that's good.
All right review time! This story is amazing, 10/10 for translation. The mc is very smart and is being fleshed out well. 10/10 characters development. The world background hints at a much bigger story and im super excited for. 10/10 world building. overall its a very fun story of a mc slowly building his strength and network. 10/10 would recommend!!! I hope tgis gets picked! Please webnovel pick this one!
I havent read yet, but, based on the rating of the novel, the fact that it isn't harem, and the tags of the novel along with the lack of reviews, I find it mandatory to give a five star review now, and give a serious review once I've read 50 chapters and 100 chapters.
This is review for only 60 chapters during Trial Period of this novel.A very good novels for those who like Magic Elements. Don't get fooled by the "Video Game" genre of this novel. There is no system, STAT page, World Announcement or Ranking Leaderboard. The Game Interface is divided into Announcement(Level Up, Exp Gain, Quest, Update Notice, etc), Spell Models(spells that MC knows).It also contains a bit of Dark theme storyline as MC get to know that a Noble Family in the game world ate Human Heart(Orphan Children's) as they believed it will help then gain more lifespan.If you forget about the Real World, Game Cabins and Player Resurrection Skill then this novel is just like any other(good) cultivation novel(Magic except of Qi). MC is a OP mage because of his unique Talent "Magic Power Control". Any character in the game can choose 2 talents freely but MC already has this innate talent chosen for him so he was only able to choose 1 talent freely.Very little is known about the worlds both Game and Real. In these 60 chapters, Real World Storyline mostly revolves around MC updating his forum page, MC and his friends talking about the game in MC's friend's bar, MC in his office handing his Resignation Letter to the Manager. As for the Game World Storyline, it revolves around the town where MC spawned, the city he goes to, name of the country they are in and The Holy Realm where you have to go to make a guild.And lastly if you like this novel after reading and want to read MTL then you can search its chinese name on google. Its chinese name is:- 法爷永远是你大爷最新章节
overall a great read but far too much time skip at the end. I've got to ask why the rush to finish it so quickly?
THERE ARE SOME SPOILERS. Nothing major just about how the mc acts and some reasons explaining the points of why I am wanting to drop. (Hopefully the author can clear some of it up?)The two major problems for me that stand out above everything else, that is making me want to drop are, When does he stop becoming a slave to his "uncle"? I just cbf to waste any more time on this if doesn't stop soon. I mean he should already have his doubts about him already. From all his supposed intelligence the mc was shown to have during the earlier chapters, it's baffling how he doesn't have some doubts. His town was supposedly killed by beasts but he is magically the only one still alive? He doesn't remember anything but when he does or tries to it is painful?He should have had his doubts in his "uncle" considering these facts but still believe in him considering all the time they spent together. However, it should have become frighteningly clear that something is wrong after speaking to Lan. Let's not forget what he called the uncle and even hinted at why. But the most important thing is he learnt about the soul/mental technique. He can make someone kill themselves, take their memories etc. This should have made it glaringly obvious and confirmed his doubts about something about his uncle is wrong. He should know that if he can do it, what is stopping an even stronger person doing it to him? Or is he so fcking arrogant to ignore this? He should have realised that his supposed memory loss is because of a soul/mental technique. Then adding on all the other clues he has been given then he should rly be starting to doubt his "uncle" and start realising some of the truth... However, it's like let's just ignore all that and keep the mc as a dog/slave/pet of the uncle. Make the mc seeth with rage everyone says something to discredit his master and be a good little pet and make him proud...I honestly can't stand it and rly want the author to just get on with it. The whole memory, adding on with all these clues should have acc lead to something. Another thing is the whole rage thing... I liked his other personality better. Where he didn't care about what others thought. Ignored them and only went after people who are directly after him. Now lately it's just been the mc acting like a fcking madman for no reason. I'm guessing it's because of the scripture or his special body that is giving him the rage. It was mentioned it was half the rage and the other half was him the calm side so maybe he has a beast side? However, how long does this last, when or does he reach a balance? I don't want to read about a psychopath madman that just wants to kill everything... compared to his first personality its a difference between night and day. I dunno just cbf to read about an mc losing control constantly going on a rampage every time he fights... plus it always starts or ends with the mc always smiling EVERY SINGLE TIME. Like we get it he is crazy. Do you have to mention the smile that everyone notices but him every time he fights or about to battle??But yeah, prefer the mc having some intelligence like it was made out he had but in reality, he doesn't... Yeah, anyway gl to Author
love this story and should read as much as possible where MC is highly OP with his bloodline changes and harem girls only seeks for his good upto point of leaving him but alas its have long since updated feels so lonely without reading it
This novel was honestly very good at the beginning as it spawned a manhua and an anime but unfortunately, the author decided to throw away their opportunity by destroying an amazing novel. At the moment, this author is trying to rush through the entire story while only releasing a chapter a month. How is he rushing when he is only releasing a chapter a month? He decided to give MC apparently an infinite supply of cultivation items so he and the rest of his sect and anyone who allied themselves with him would be overpowered. With this rush, it has spawned numerous plotholes and it gets worse and worse as the novel slowly continues. I'm disappointed the author let down his readers and obviously let the popularity and fame get to his head and I can honestly say with how bad his previous works were and his disgusting work ethics I will no longer be supporting nor reading any more of the author's works.
heyo crazy cronie here,review on 01/09/2021 @chap 211(released chap till date: 219)review divided in: Short reviewLong review with ratingsCC rants.ConclusionSHORT REVIEW: A slow paced SOLish where mc accepts disciples with some action & comedy.LONG REVIEW: writing: 9/10 Lil typo mistakes but not to the point where it hinders your reading experience... at least I didn't have any prob. update: 10+2/10 Yeah, deserves more than the max rating... For me 7 ch/week is must for full rating for any original novels and this one releases more than 7plot: 7/10 ^ Don't get me wrong for the low ratings... There is nothing wrong with the story... The world is being slowly introduced to us which is something I really enjoy^ the story is well connected and till now there is no plothole (nothing caught my eyes atleast.)^ But the low rating of this section is because author-chan it seems you forgot the title~ I mean *spoiler* it has been almost 150 chaps he din get any Disciple. *spoiler end* ^ the system hasn't been really explained... Tho it might be done in the future.. for now i dont have any ideaI mean till now I thought it's only related to disciples but suddenly we get different side missions *spoiler* about finding the core of the secret realm and then a survival quest.*spoiler end* ...characters: 8.5/10 Nothing bad... Most characters have their own quirk, but still characters could have been given a little more depth. Till now tho it's good.pacing: 9/10 ^ This is a slow paced novel. And it's really enjoyable reading this... ^ -1 maybe because i feel a little increase in pace would do good? Just my opiniondialogues: 9.5/10 Author did a good job here. People conversing here is one of the things most likeable about this novel.entertainment: 9/10 Welp this is a biased rating since it totally depends upon how much I enjoyed...Overall: 4.5/5 CC rants:-^ Well, first of all I should correct my previous review. This isn't similar to History's no. 1 founder in anyway..... This one leans more towards SOL compared to HN1F which is action packed.^ Secondly this is for ya author-chan~It's high time we have a disciple xD... ^ Also high time MC breakthrough next realm.... ^ This is for the readers... MC is little intelligent compared to other novels so you won't get irritated by his dumbness..^ And well... nothing else keep updating ?CONCLUSION:This is one of my weekly pastime... I just stack chaps to read it every weekend...And a must read if you're into SOL type novels...I'll say it once again; there is no romance, harem so to all suckers for this genre stay away... (I'm a sucker for harem and this is one of the few novels I'm reading which doesn't have harem)
Okay. Here is an honest review of what I think of the story so far. As of right now there are 28 chapters so anything in the comment may not be true anymore. Also I won't spoil anything.So. First of all what do I think of the story. It is a good story. And I mean that. It has an interesting idea, and has some really (at least to me) cool super powers, and monsters. It has some interesting character that I do hope to see expanded on. While I do feel some can do better I personally don't hate any of them. Secondly. The grammar is good, but in terms of that I am heavily biased. I have been reading so many stories that have so many mistakes that after reading this one it was refreshing. Now it does mess up so it is by no means perfect. Hell it does have a few mistakes in writing now that I think back on it but compared to some of the other 'stories' I have read a few mistakes are things I can forgive. Now for what is the biggest problem I have with this story. The length of it... This story is a massive slow burn! It takes like 20 chapters before the plot starts working... Now usually I wouldn't mind that but the chapters are so God Damn long... Like stupidly long... There's a point where there are 5 chapters all with at least 5k words in a row!!! Now look. I do like long chapters, but damn! Now if you like long chapters than you'll like it. Now I will say it does seem to be speeding up? Maybe? I dunno. The plot seems to be moving now which is good... But seriously I hope those chapters start to get shorter considering the fact that with the massive chapters and the slow burn plot it can be annoying. Thankfully I do like the characters, and there are some funny jokes that keep me in. So all in all if you have time go ahead and read this. But be warned as it will take time to finish this one...
My first read in the world of Webnovel and I enjoy it A LOT. Fast paced sometimes, slow paced sometimes, a lot of romance, drama, conflicts, wars, a very complete story. The best and the worst part of the novel to me is the protagonist, Berengar is a excelent representation of the human being when they gain power, how they show their true nature. He is a extremely hypocrite guy, or the type of protagonist who their feelings and actions are dictated for his convenience and autor convenience. Cruel with his enemies but loving with his loved ones but at the same type so fking selfish that sometimes he don't give a fk about his loved ones and take decisions and does things that hurt them deeply and in any ferfetched way throw them the guilt. A sentence that my grandma says a lot represent him very well: The dead man is scared of the slaugthered man. The definition of hypocrisy. But hey don't misunderstand me, this not make the novel less great, just is something that maybe not much readers like.
Well. At first, Im actually read this cuz im bored and have nothing to do. But suddenly I found myself binge reading this entire day and nightSo you can suppose that I am like this story.The thing is, when I'm read this novel suddenly I am remember about code geass. Dunno why. Cuz the mc maybe.Or smthgI just hope this not end like code geass thoPlease ? pretty please? And make the mc more of with more mutants flesh.Till no hint of humanity in himEven tho I dunno if he still have thatEhhhhI'm writing a long review hmmmMehWhatever-Keep. Up the good work ladAnd became slave to the readers! HAHAHA