AndreUceda
1 year and I still remember this great novel thank you kind sir :)
All your reviews somehow makes me want to read the novel in question. You have a godly talent in persuasion
Oh, how bad is it?
decent read 8.5/10
Chapter 17 and I'm done. For pete's sake, in the 90s, medical prodigy at 15??? It has some potential when it was said that she's a good assassin and agent but when they put a bunch of shits just to make her profile op and stuff, boring and cringey. It makes me feel embarrassed reading it. The thing is, the pace is good at the start, why do you have to put so much bullshits in it, making it more unrealistic. You see, there is a borderline between unrealistic and fiction. This is just total bullshit unrealism. I'm out. 2/10
Why there is'nt any new chapter of this novel, is it dropped?
I don't like Lu Beichen character. He's not even attending his wedding with Gu Jingyan and chasing after his ordinary girlfriend. I don't understand what writer want with all these throwback from the past. After few years marriage he is still not gentleman with endless of bickering. If I am Gu Jingyan I will leave him on the same day after wedding ceremony. So what if they love each other but never once respect their partner. If someone ask me the most hateful character in this novel. I will choose him. That b*****d Lu Beichen. I think GU Jingyan deserved someone better. Why so hateful?
Thank u author
No romance so far... maybe the reply below the comment below me is true. So far, it’s all comedy and action + the characters almost seems real for me actually. And the story is good so far... some parts might confuse you if you don’t use your brain well though, hahaha
Personally I'm a very fan of MC Lucas Monreau, the atmosphere around the work is magnificent.
I am really enjoying the story so far. I would like to say when you introduced Lyra in her beast form that you should change it back to a lion head because seeing a human head just doesn't sit right with the proportions of her body. I don't know how much you will update this regularly but I would be fine with even 5 a week so you can have a little rest and have more time to write and gather your thoughts.
keep up the good work.
The novel at the beginning was alright, you could see the basic premises of where the story will go but around the end of volume 1 it got.... boring. The multiple povs and showing the future is what dissapointed me the most, idc bout your crappy english im reading the story to see how far the protagonist will go and not the future of the protagonist. Honestly I thought Earth 2 would have the same structure as Earth Prime but it didnt. Now theres heros wtf? Lord Shadow became a hero? When he first arrived at Earth 2 and destoyed the meterorite he was called the Dark Knight but then in like 2 chapters hes called by a ****ty name and now theres a rich guy using his blood to create super soldiers. *Sigh* The beginning was good it wasnt great but I held on because I thought this novel was different. I was right. It became boring.
P.S - (This is just me rambaling on but yeah) Dont use caps when the system is showing something, its hard to read, use brackets it shows that you at least care but how much you present yourself. Also whats with showing all his skills, pillars and items at once (dont know cause I always skiped it when he showed the status) it looks stupid, use sections and sub sections. Have you not read video game novels? The author shows great care in there work by putting brackets in when the system is doing something. I mean why would you use caps when the system is talking, its hard to read as well as the fact that its ugly. Have you never proof read your work?
