AndreUceda
Awesome read! can't wait for mass release!about snowflakes complaints, grow up
Hello, Author here i'm giving myself a pretty average rating since i'm new to writing, and that i'm rather forgetful and may need to change a few things, but overtime i'll improve!
I’m really loving this! Can’t wait for more chapters:) It’s on par with those popular wuxia novels, and it combines my favourite genres. Excited to see more chapters!
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I'm a fan of the whole negative reversal sort of systems but there is just something off about the way the chapter reads that it's just painful on the eyes to read this. I'm not entirely sure why that is but I had to stop reading because it was giving me a headache.
same author as doomsday online...no thanks... author has a habit of not finishing his novels..this even looks like doomsday...starting with an angel?
Make sure you are better and don't risk your health over a few chapters and make sure to make many instead. even if we have to WAIT! Your story are progressing in a direktion that make me believe the story! I live the life of the character when I read the story!
do not waste your time reading this story unless you are new to reading we novels on this site. Every single character is braindead, naive, and cliche. The premise isn't used in an interesting or satisfying way whatsoever. And the plot is so trash a 5 year old could do it better. absolutely nothing about this is worth reading about.
bruh for sure webnovel will choose this novel to satisfy pervs even if the story is trash......... why? WHY?!?!???????????????????????
The novel is a fresh concept and also has a good rate of update the characters are more human and their is a zing to stories and at least the author try to carry along the readers and the grammar are good enough and the same time he tries to teach some basic language to it's reader
This seriously needs more chapters. The foreshadowing and little by little world building are amazing.
i need to vote again this time. i think this story is good because of too many voters.. this story will be my next target.. good luck air.. thanks
