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In another authors hands this story could have been a master peice never seen before. The ideas and world building are marvelous. Unfortunately this author has some kind of weird fetish with making his characters trash and all over the place. Even his bio says that his main characters are unlikeable. So unfortunately this story falls short.
One of the best......
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This book is awesome and the pacing is great. I wrote a review when it was still in its infancy and I just knew this book will be awesome....I'm gonna be one of those who can brag when this book becomes one of the best ?Great work author!!
Passive writing style same for the character. Story development is okay?The concept of the character and the world is pretty interesting and all, but there are lots of holes when in comes to some details that aren't told at all that makes it passive. I felt like I needed to make my own details in my head. so yeah that's pretty much it...Concept of being a vlogger and getting stronger is nice but the system is like how do we say this... It feels like it's new born it's missing lots of things. The power level of characters feel so different when I try to compare them with the side characters. Ranking of power is pretty badly made ig, Mc also doesn't keep his surrounding in check which kind of annoys me, for my personal opinion that is.
That's a good story and i really like it. You've probably readed Jay Aslan cus that's exaclty the same start. A MC in coma for years, a lovely rich family and i'm not here to judge you. I've thinked to make the same start to my novel but i prefere to make something unique. If you want a author's tip, i really recomend you to do a synopsis and a cape for your book. You can look at mine and see the diference. We have the same number of chapters and the same potential soo, let's grow togheter!(My novel is "Zhanye Black - To be a superstar".)
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Thank you for writing this book, I think there is some punctuation mistake but still tolerable and enjoyable✨✨✨✨✨
*This review is based on my opinion at chapter 36(I havent gone further).Well there's not really much I can say. Great world builinding, good character development.The lone complaint i have is the story's pacing. I am naturally biased towards fast paced stories so I would have a hard time recommending this to someone with the same bias.
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