I really like it, sadly it has been some time since the last update
This sh!t should be good if you don't include the female teacher who constantly harassing MC everytime she meets him and MC who just keep accept the abuse and saying "she's good girl and good seedling to become an alchemist", when he can just twart her like a fly and put her in her place. B! Tch! What a disappointment!
Also this sh! T is pretty much like Alchemy God something, MC is strong, badass when confronting enemy but act wimpy when he is with female teacher and female student...
Just amazing.. I mean, what else can I say? Amazing writing style, storyline and even powers. Although we haven't really seen much of it (powers i mean). I absolutely love the sibling duo, Sylvester and Lilia. And for a change of pace this ain't a fake villain story, but actually a proper villainous one in which the mc (and his sister for once! Most authors just use this kind of character as a moral compass for the mc, but so far that hasn't happened in this one. Lilia is fully supportive of her brother) kills and steals and threatens without any ounce of remorse or guilt. I love it.
20 chapters in and this novel seems to be a promising one. MC is at least a sensible character that I can easily get behind so far. Looking forward for more.
I finished all 19 chapters and although I enjoy your premise and everything leading up to MC awakening his hidden gift, I found an issue with the execution of during the time Judgment and Pride were introduced. Chapter 14 and 15 were the biggest issues since we have sudden swaps between first person pov and third person pov. For example, you use "I
It is something one could read while having nothing to do and no other thing to read doesn't mean it is bad just lacking in sense of crisis and excitement hope those will be added too,On the postive side the author is regular the story is fun the character are 3D it is realistic
I hope that the author would continue writing, the world building is interesting and there is a potential that the novel would become more interesting as more chapters would come
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The writing is amazing ? And the story is thrilling to the point you are reading it till 2:39 in the morning because you can’t stop reading. By far one of the best novels i have read anyway.
5 Star for no harem. .
The story is really a fantasy, most people crave for, I am able to enjoy the characters development and most especially the world, my mind does pretty well imagining what u trying to create. I feel the story twist will get more wilder
Started reading this morning and I'm already on Ch.10 :D I'm hyped for every chapter and can't wait to see what happens next each time. Despite this being the first webnovel I've read (i'm usually reading webtoons LOL), I'm actually pretty invested 0v0. The imagery is clear and descriptive and I have fun picturing the world in my head. Keep it up dude! ^^