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The story plot are different and amazing... Especially family really great... It was so interestingHave a nice day...
So he released high level techniques for women only, in the long run they have outperformed all men and when he dies it probably won't change because all the techniques remain targeted. I believe that the history of the world gets more interesting after the death of the MC.
To keep it short and to the point: A sure read, and a great story. I wish we had more stories like this one, where you don't have MC's that are "smart" because everyone else is an idiot, where you have some really strong feels moments, and where not everyone is an enemy, and the MC is the perpetual underdog. The time for those annoying stories has passed. This is in. This. Is. Now.
Copy and pasted my original review sue meIt's a very well written story so far. The writing quality is excellent for someone who's first language isn't English.The stability of updates seem to be good from the dates posted on the chapters, only time will tell though.The story development so far is interesting, definitely very catching as your first read it simply because the character seems more down to earth and isn't straight up gung-ho as other stories of this nature seem to be when things first starts. Hopefully the character will adapt to the world yet still retain his core values from earth and possibly even try to integrate these values into the world over time, instead of just saying **** it and giving in to the regular values of the cultivation world and simply abandoning the values of a modern day earth.The character design could use some more in depth personality description and history, such as flashbacks to memories that help to shape him to be the person he is and show much more accurately why he makes decisions the way he does.The world background is pretty much ok,but it presents the opportunity for much more complex world building as the story progresses as the character himself knows very little of the world he is so far.Overall, the story is well written, has seemingly stable updates; quality story development; character design that,while could use some improvement , is presently pretty good,and world background that has enough room for it to be developed and designed so as to be complex and very interesting.Hopefully, the author takes a route where the character would try to integrate modern earth values through perhaps a seemingly quirky yet solid character that strives to, while not being a bleeding heart hero like superman or all might, improve the world in a realistic yet simple thought process, such as the 'pay it forward' philosophy where one kind act can repaid by paying it forward to another unfortunate individual as well as implementing a modern day earth practices such as basic education institutions like primary schools, secondary schools, tertiary schools and universities in a effort to unite people under a single banner rather than fractured into different clans and sects that hoard knowledge like a miser hoards money. Just a thought, otherwise do you author and let the haters go **** themselves.
review as of chapter 400, it's actually very nice. if you like cultivating for 1thousand yrs, then you'll probably like this. they're a little similar but the mc here is not as cautious compared to 1thousand yrs. what i really like here is that there's literally no woman here spoiler he can cultivate avatars, and his avatars also has eternal life
This story really looks to be a very interesting story I think I just might end up liking it very much just by reading the reviews and summary. It’s definitely a story I will read for sure from start to finish! I wonder which characters I will end up hating and loving.? I’ll give it a high rating for now?? Great job translating or writing the story!!
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Everything is very good….except the use of western name.Author, if u don’t know the gender of a first name, don’t know how to use first name and surname, and even mistaken one character for another, just don’t use them and keep to eastern names.In first chap i thought it was a mistake but I am at 120 chap and it is the same. There is at least 1 mistake by chap. It seems to me u don’t care about ur story.
I cannot comprehend why one would leave a one star review because of some community. It is fact that some cultures are better than others if that were not the case we would not have criminalised female genital mutilations. (We still have not done it for male but that is another discussion). I’m going to be honest here, I did this review only to spite people leaving really low quality reviews without any kind of criticism that is actually valid. Make critical analysis of his writing instead of political. Jesus... by the way anecdotal evidence is only good sometimes but not to make a larger point so stop it. Just because you may not have seen any gangsters of one type of community it does not mean that it is not a trend. There is always exception towards one generalisiation but that does not mean that generalisations are inherently bad because most of them have basis in reality.
Nao sei se é so eu que vejo isso, mas quando eu to vendo um novel chinesa, tenho que a china é uma terra sem lei, e o autor não pode reclamar diretamente, se não ele vai ser preso e torturado.